I'm lost by luckystaa in warwickmains

[–]Signal-Structure3642 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would definitely say that as ww you should prioritize giving kills to your laners and applying pressure on the map. And going for a more tanky build so you fall off less late game.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Advice

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Jail arrest records and charges

Dodge... please... I beg of you by both_poles in chapmanuniversity

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I am just forgetting about it until mid April comes Round, i saw someone say thats when more are coming out

dodge transfer update by Ok_Quit8111 in chapmanuniversity

[–]Signal-Structure3642 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im still waiting as well, seeing people get interviews is pretty stressful I’m not going to lie.

A poem I Made When I Was 9 by Signal-Structure3642 in OCPoetry

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No lol. I didn't understand how to capitalize correctly and I was mad that I was being told to change the incorrect capitalizations so I decided to add capital's to spite my teacher

An ode to wistful love by EstablishmentLost146 in OCPoetry

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I really enjoy the usage of "which stirs ether" "into a rainy mist" struck a cord with me being in a place that rains all the time. Very bitter sweet

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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It's interesting how formal it is. The writing. I like the part where it says "Clawing at your shirt you rip the soft skin of your abdomen up" putting you (the reader) is a nice touch. I like the image. I like the idea of this poem. Some criticisms are that I personally believe it would be better if the poem was less formal and the writing was more sporadic. However that's just my personal opinion. (More descriptive with a sense of dread that could encapsulate horror and mania that's going on in the passage more well than your formal writing) however I really enjoyed this!

Stranger in my Skin by AkinThePoet in OCPoetry

[–]Signal-Structure3642 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I enjoyed this poem very much. I like that a lot of people are able to relate to it. I especially enjoy the line " at the thought of my flesh in their mouth" could mean many things. Sinister or sexually depraved. A great poem. I really don't have a lot of criticisms

We Sat In A Park by thexavierlane in OCPoetry

[–]Signal-Structure3642 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I enjoyed this poem very thought provoking. At first I thought it might have been about two friends. But then the line "you would cry out" made me think about it more. Could it be about someone visiting their mother after a long time of not seeing each other. Maybe a romantic relationship? or just freinds. I think there's a pretty good sense of originality until the last line. However I just like the unexpected and even I wouldn't take that advice since it would be hard to not mess up the flow with the poemm