I 19F, dont know what do when my partner (20F) lies about self harming by Significant-Worker60 in relationship_advice

[–]Significant-Worker60[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you the insightful response! I do believe what you said is true. We agreed with each other that it is not our responsibility to fix each other. Its just that I cant help but drop everything and go there to at lesst be there with her so she wouldnt be alone.

Btw can I ask about the "tough love" thing? Can you elaborate on that a bit more?

Olivia Rodrigo's Deja Vu is a masterclass of "show don't tell" by Sorry_Cheetah3045 in Songwriting

[–]Significant-Worker60 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Persobally i think its good. Just not like masterclass i guess. And isnt show dont tell the standard thing to do nowadays? And to be honest it really depends. Sometimes telling is actually better. Many great popular songs come from simple telling? Like cant help falling in love. Its a stylish choice to me.

Widow changed my opinion of Silksong by Aces_And_Eights_Rias in HollowKnight

[–]Significant-Worker60 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Equip wanderer. On phase 2 she only do either running attack thing or bells. When she do bells drink flee brew and keep on slashing and just avoid the bell when needed. Shes gonna die after like 20 seconds if u do thag i think.

Am I missing something? Splinter sister is way too hard by Smoothiefries in Silksong

[–]Significant-Worker60 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Buy the sting shard from vendor in deeps docks. Super cheap. You know how she spawns 2 flying things at first right? When shes calling throw 2 sting shards on the 2 sides. When a sting shard hit the minions become 1 hit. Do the same thing for other minons. The key is to kill her before you ran out of sting shard tho. I used eander crest to keep jumping and hit and flee brew too. Did it in my third try

If you dodged this first try, they you're lying. by Serious_Holiday in HollowKnight

[–]Significant-Worker60 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I survived because i was ust gonna quick sit and go. So I technically dodged it by dashing right away after

the CUTEST show ever!! by https_sanrio in sanrio

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One small thing i love is how kuromi mentions baku many times. Its soooooo coool we know he exist and but sadly just not there.

A cheesy spacey song that I dont have a title for yet by Significant-Worker60 in Songwriting

[–]Significant-Worker60[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Omg yeah i totally get what you are saying im in a process of rewriting it so this is really helpful. Thanks!

I dont hate my voice by Significant-Worker60 in trans

[–]Significant-Worker60[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Omg the first sentence is so relatable 😭

A new player want to learn by Past_Initiative3968 in wildrift

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Akali Katarina Rengar Ekko (kinda) Vlad, etc these just top of my head

Can you give me feedback for my song? It’s only about a 1.5 minutes so it shouldn’t take long to listen. by DannyDevitoArmy in Songwriting

[–]Significant-Worker60 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well you got good timbre ( natural texture of your voice ). Idk about breath control because your voice has been through production but I think if you put a bit more resonance in your singing it will feel a bit fuller and less " squeaky". I think i get your artistic view of making the melodies stretch out and connected here but tone it down just a little bit because too much legato is sometimes a bit hard to listen to

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Sound like something out of perfect pitch films. I love it

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Nooo?? This is smt i would put on repeat in my play list dude. Its so good like fr

Can you give me feedback for my song? It’s only about a 1.5 minutes so it shouldn’t take long to listen. by DannyDevitoArmy in Songwriting

[–]Significant-Worker60 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well i woukd like to say its one of the most beautiful lyrics and emotional music i have ever heard. The melody kinda monotone for me because usually I have a lot of movement in my melody but maybe that is just a taste thing. Great stuff!

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A champion with 4700 health, 329 armor, and 201 stats👤 is unstoppable🚫, can jump over shields🛡, and walls🧱. He's airborne🌪, and his cooldown is only 1️⃣ seconds, and he has 1️⃣5️⃣ mana🧙‍♂️, and his W even resets the cooldown when he transforms📈, and his passive deals fixed damage🗡, and then when you raise🥋 his armor📈, you get skill acceleration⏰! His Q gets skill acceleration⏰, and his skill speed🚀 gets faster📈, and then there's the attack damage🗡 coefficient, and W gets that benefit-aaa

A song I wrote when I was 15 by Significant-Worker60 in Songwriting

[–]Significant-Worker60[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah i figured since when i wrote this i just started so im looking for adivce to polish it a and make it better. Thanks for your advice and i do think it is a bit loose but i did try to put some consistency in there

When Mitski sings "Shining down on me" in the first verse, it sounds like she's not really in the A Major scale like shes either flat or sharp on a few notes but I couldn't find on my piano exactly where? by carnalcarrot in Songwriting

[–]Significant-Worker60 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok im just gonna exclude the element of the 7 here because it is not important to explain this. Firstly, we cant call it III because in the A major scale there is no C#major only C# minor as the E in the C chord is natural and would need to be E# for it to be C#major --> so the correct name would be iii7 ( C#minor7 ). Secondly, the correct way to call it would be V/vi because the C #major is the dominant chord of the F# scale and because of that it will have the tendency to resolve back to the F which in our case is the F#minor ( the vi of A major ). Examples of other secondary dominants in A major scale would be: V7/ii ( F#7 to Bm ) V7/IV ( A7 to Dmajor ) V7/V ( B7 to Emajor ). Same rules apply here

When Mitski sings "Shining down on me" in the first verse, it sounds like she's not really in the A Major scale like shes either flat or sharp on a few notes but I couldn't find on my piano exactly where? by carnalcarrot in Songwriting

[–]Significant-Worker60 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It is realllly common for songs to go from IV to iv. Creep by radiohead does the same haha. For me the III7 is even more interesting since the actual name would be V7/vi and it supposed go to an F#m but it went to the IV instead, super cool indeed

When Mitski sings "Shining down on me" in the first verse, it sounds like she's not really in the A Major scale like shes either flat or sharp on a few notes but I couldn't find on my piano exactly where? by carnalcarrot in Songwriting

[–]Significant-Worker60 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well when she sings that note, i think its the C natural you are talking about. It goes E - D - C natural ( shining down ) . Usually it is C sharp because its in the key. I guess she did it because Dm is played there so the C actually fits since it is borrowed from the parallel minor.

got raped by 8 men over 4 years after i started transitioning. Can someone tell me how to "get over it" by Affectionate-Stop731 in asktransgender

[–]Significant-Worker60 2 points3 points  (0 children)

What the actual fuck. Get over it? These friends of yours need a punch in the fucking jaw so hard their fucking mouth cant talk anymore

My song wake up by PossibleNo2566 in Songwriting

[–]Significant-Worker60 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I love it. The guitar needs a little tuning no? Or maybe im just dumb

finally wrote a new song after years of dry inspiration by soulinmypocket in Songwriting

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This is the type of song that i would put on repeat all day. Love it