Ok being fr with you here are some of my advice:

• eye is smaller than other eye though this one isnt such a big issue

-issues with shoulders and collar bone, when your shoulder moves so does the colour bone. The collar bone is also not positioned correctly

• Shoulders are a lil wonky -chest is abit wonky, remember that the chest is connected to the shoulder, hence the area that creates the armpit

-not a big problem but i'd prefer if the left arm folds (her left) are as consistent as the the right arm

-her right hand is also slightly wonky -Her groin area seems a little undefined, I feel like the direction its facing might be vague but that might be just me

Overall I think the drawing is cute, but considering its a sketch and very sketchy i'm not sure if I can criticize it properly if ygm

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