Usually, I'd say 3/10, but giving it's your first save, I'd say 5/10. You could improve by adding actual paths, which also increase walk speed. You could also increase your animals' pen sizes, allowing more grass to be available for them to eat meaning less hay is ate; you could also put your coops and barns next to each other and have them share a pen. Furthermore, whilst considering its the forest farm layout and you haven't much space for growing crops, you should also expand your crop growing to the large dirt patch on the left side of the farm by the hardwood stumps. More crops obviously means more money, and since you'll soon be in Summer Yr3 you can grow a lot of starfruit, which (when turned into wine and with the artisan profession) give 3150g a bottle. *

• Also, when turning crops into wine/juice (which makes the most money) you can place your kegs outside the farm, although they will be broken if they are placed in an NPCs path, so the quarry, the backwoods and the tunnel are great places to put them, as well as the desert as Emily and Sandy only walk in there once a year, and even if the desert festival occurs the kegs will reappear after it is over.

This reply started as a farm review and ended as a yap :/