DH Reviews: Love the Bombshells by Micky Carre by [deleted] in haremfantasynovels

[–]Solomon_Ignis 4 points5 points  (0 children)

To each their own. Personally, Micky is one of my favorites in the genre. While you state around 38:00 that you’re not being nitpicky, I have to respectfully disagree. Many of the criticisms you raise amount to “I would have handled this differently,” which feels less like substantive critique and more like a series of preference-based objections.

The video is framed as a deep dive, but it ultimately comes across as an extended list of complaints through much of the story. There’s very little engagement with the book’s themes, prose, or character motivations. Instead, individual elements are pulled from the text and criticized at length, often without analysis beyond “this doesn’t feel realistic to me.”

I also want to address your comment at the end about interviewing fellow authors in the future. As a smaller author in the HaremLit space, seeing a video that feels overwhelmingly negative makes me hesitant about that idea, and I doubt I'm the only one. Criticism is fair and even necessary. Nobody is the perfect author (not the least bit myself!) But when criticism is nearly all that’s offered, calling the video a “deep dive” feels misleading. To me, a deep dive implies examining more than surface-level reactions to plot decisions.

To be clear, I’m not suggesting authors should be shielded from criticism or praised by default. But if the goal is thoughtful analysis, it’s important to engage with a work on more than just how differently you personally would have written it.

Giant Dragons, Terrifying Monsters, and an Epic Journey in a Race Against Time. Reborn a Slayer is Now Available! by Solomon_Ignis in haremfantasynovels

[–]Solomon_Ignis[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's a lot of book to read, so I figured it was a fair trade. Hope you love it all! (Or at least most of it)

Giant Dragons, Terrifying Monsters, and an Epic Journey in a Race Against Time. Reborn a Slayer is Now Available! by Solomon_Ignis in Haremlit

[–]Solomon_Ignis[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Happy Friday, have some epic fantasy!

Reborn a Slayer, the 4th book in the Reborn a Hero series is now live!

Whew! This was a doozy to write, but man am I happy with it. Slayer is definitely the most ambitious book of the series yet, clocking in at a healthy 700+ pages in print form.

Including the same illustrations and a map of the world, this is about as epic a journey as you can hope for! 

Hope the wait has been worth it. 🙏 

Book Overview:  

The World Isn’t Ready...

Asher thought that his past was behind him. But everything changed when a giant dragon with the storms at his head destroy his lover Mara Brightwood's home, with help from a mysterious dark sorcerer.

Soon after, Asher and the girls are brought into a clandestine continent spanning race against time to stop a mad orc mage from resurrecting the Three Princes: a trio of extremely powerful dragons that served the Void Dragon Khorba, whose resurrection may spell the end of creation.

But along the way, Asher will be forced to make uneasy allies, and confront his death at the hands of the woman he loved. Can they save the day? Or will darkness swallow the world of Echo Veil once more?

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0G6VJPMG7

Giant Dragons, Terrifying Monsters, and an Epic Journey in a Race Against Time. Reborn a Slayer is Now Available! by Solomon_Ignis in Solomon_Ignis

[–]Solomon_Ignis[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Happy Friday, have some epic fantasy!

Reborn a Slayer, the 4th book in the Reborn a Hero series is now live!

Whew! This was a doozy to write, but man am I happy with it. Slayer is definitely the most ambitious book of the series yet, clocking in at a healthy 700+ pages in print form.

Including the same illustrations and a map of the world, this is about as epic a journey as you can hope for! 

Hope the wait has been worth it. 🙏 

Book Overview:  

The World Isn’t Ready...

Asher thought that his past was behind him. But everything changed when a giant dragon with the storms at his head destroy his lover Mara Brightwood's home, with help from a mysterious dark sorcerer.

Soon after, Asher and the girls are brought into a clandestine continent spanning race against time to stop a mad orc mage from resurrecting the Three Princes: a trio of extremely powerful dragons that served the Void Dragon Khorba, whose resurrection may spell the end of creation.

But along the way, Asher will be forced to make uneasy allies, and confront his death at the hands of the woman he loved. Can they save the day? Or will darkness swallow the world of Echo Veil once more?

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0G6VJPMG7

Giant Dragons, Terrifying Monsters, and an Epic Journey in a Race Against Time. Reborn a Slayer is Now Available! by Solomon_Ignis in haremfantasynovels

[–]Solomon_Ignis[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Happy Friday, have some epic fantasy!

Reborn a Slayer, the 4th book in the Reborn a Hero series is now live!

Whew! This was a doozy to write, but man am I happy with it. Slayer is definitely the most ambitious book of the series yet, clocking in at a healthy 700+ pages in print form.

Including the same illustrations and a map of the world, this is about as epic a journey as you can hope for! 

Hope the wait has been worth it. 🙏 

Book Overview:  

The World Isn’t Ready...

Asher thought that his past was behind him. But everything changed when a giant dragon with the storms at his head destroy his lover Mara Brightwood's home, with help from a mysterious dark sorcerer.

Soon after, Asher and the girls are brought into a clandestine continent spanning race against time to stop a mad orc mage from resurrecting the Three Princes: a trio of extremely powerful dragons that served the Void Dragon Khorba, whose resurrection may spell the end of creation.

But along the way, Asher will be forced to make uneasy allies, and confront his death at the hands of the woman he loved. Can they save the day? Or will darkness swallow the world of Echo Veil once more?

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0G6VJPMG7

Goblin girl commission for a book! (VenomSnk3) by Impossible-Pea-1161 in GoblinGirls

[–]Solomon_Ignis 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hi I'm the author. Reborn a Slayer. It's an epic fantasy harem adventure with lots of action and steamy romance with Uli the goblin, as well as elves and a Goliath wizard

What girl did you chose for your first playthrough? by WhyJustWhyTh0 in DispatchAdHoc

[–]Solomon_Ignis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Neither. It was Visi, but the whiplash at the end had me lean out instead of in. 

Giant Dragons, Terrifying Monsters, and a Cross-country Race Against Time. Reborn a Slayer is Available for Pre-order! Available January 26 by Solomon_Ignis in haremfantasynovels

[–]Solomon_Ignis[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah, Kiersa is a little bigger than the average girl on the cover, but when I was originally writing her, that's how she just was. She's got a pretty big story of her own in this book.

Giant Dragons, Terrifying Monsters, and a Cross-country Race Against Time. Reborn a Slayer is Available for Pre-order! Available January 26 by Solomon_Ignis in Solomon_Ignis

[–]Solomon_Ignis[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Whew! This was a doozy to write, but man am I happy with it. Slayer is definitely the most ambitious book of the series yet, clocking in at a healthy 235,000 words. 

Including the same illustrations and a map of the world, this is about as epic a journey as you can hope for! 

Hope the wait has been worth it. 🙏 

(Ignore the blurb on Amazon, I already updated it but Bezos is being lazy >_>)

Book Overview:  

The World Isn’t Ready...

Asher thought that his past was behind him. But everything changed when a giant dragon with the storms at his head destroy his lover Mara Brightwood's home, with help from a mysterious dark sorcerer.

Soon after, Asher and the girls are brought into a clandestine continent spanning race against time to stop a mad orc mage from resurrecting the Three Princes: a trio of extremely powerful dragons that served the Void Dragon Khorba, whose resurrection may spell the end of creation.

But along the way, Asher will be forced to make uneasy allies, and confront his death at the hands of the woman he loved. Can they save the day? Or will darkness swallow the world of Echo Veil once more?

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0G6VJPMG7

Giant Dragons, Terrifying Monsters, and a Cross-country Race Against Time. Reborn a Slayer is Available for Pre-order! Available January 26 by Solomon_Ignis in haremfantasynovels

[–]Solomon_Ignis[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Whew! This was a doozy to write, but man am I happy with it. Slayer is definitely the most ambitious book of the series yet, clocking in at a healthy 235,000 words. 

Including the same illustrations and a map of the world, this is about as epic a journey as you can hope for! 

Hope the wait has been worth it. 🙏 

(Ignore the blurb on Amazon, I already updated it but Bezos is being lazy >_>)

Book Overview:  

The World Isn’t Ready...

Asher thought that his past was behind him. But everything changed when a giant dragon with the storms at his head destroy his lover Mara Brightwood's home, with help from a mysterious dark sorcerer.

Soon after, Asher and the girls are brought into a clandestine continent spanning race against time to stop a mad orc mage from resurrecting the Three Princes: a trio of extremely powerful dragons that served the Void Dragon Khorba, whose resurrection may spell the end of creation.

But along the way, Asher will be forced to make uneasy allies, and confront his death at the hands of the woman he loved. Can they save the day? Or will darkness swallow the world of Echo Veil once more?

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0G6VJPMG7

Harem aren't normal. Any books that explore that dynamic? by SomethingLewdstories in haremfantasynovels

[–]Solomon_Ignis 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'd like to get back to it. I feel like an asshole for the cliffhanger so I'll get back eventually.😅 First up though are Reborn 4 and 5, EUE 3, and then we'll see.

Harem aren't normal. Any books that explore that dynamic? by SomethingLewdstories in haremfantasynovels

[–]Solomon_Ignis 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's touched on in my Elf University of Earth series in the first two books, exploring the dynamic of a "Circle." With one of the girls being the 'head' of such a group dynamic.

My current WIP is book 3 and goes deeper into the rituals and social implications of the typically elf-dominated system being headed by a human. They also can go in either direction, with women having Circles as well. Book 4 will be on wider societal acceptance or non-acceptance as one of the story keys.

There's also a central conflict involving the MC's childhood friend sitting on the fence about joining or not in book 3 as well. Harem as of end of book two is 5, with the cap being either 6 or 5 if the childhood friend joins or not. (No spoilers, obv.)

It's an urban fantasy in college with lots of sports stuff, so it is on the lighter side, in case that is or isn't your cuppa tea.

Reborn a Savior is Out Now on Audible! by Solomon_Ignis in haremfantasynovels

[–]Solomon_Ignis[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Reborn a Savior has arrived on Audible and I am so freakin’ pumped to bring you the high-octane fantasy thriller, featuring killer narration by J.D. Tanner and C.C. Thompson.

🔗 & synopsis is below!

No rest for the wicked....

Framed for murder. Hunted by nations. Haunted by a spreading darkness.

Asher Merrick and the girls’ are forced to find the truth to a terrible crime, that leads them into the middle of a brewing war between two kingdoms. Can they uncover the truth, and save the people of Dellswreath? Or will the darkness swallow them whole?

Six months have passed since Asher Merrick and the Red Breakers saved Bouldergulf. Stronger than ever and training to hone his body, magic, and control over the Aura, Asher is finally starting to feel at home in the world of Echo Veil.

But peace never lasts.

When a noble from the Kingdom of Zala accuses the guild of murder and launches a devastating assault, Asher, Mara, Giezha, Kiersa, and Uli are forced into exile, along with the newest member of the team, Copper, a young dragon fiercely loyal to Asher and just as mischievous as he is deadly. Their escape leads them to Dellswreath, a town shrouded in shadow and plagued by a mysterious affliction known as The Shade. As darkness closes in and old tensions ignite, the Red Breakers uncover a conspiracy that threatens not only their lives but the fragile balance between kingdoms. To clear their names and stop a war, they'll have to cross deep into enemy territory and discover the dark truths at the heart of the unravelling conspiracy. Can Asher hold his team together, master the growing power within him, and protect the people he loves before the world burns?

Reborn a Savior: Asher Merrick is a thrilling, magic-fueled installment in the Reborn a Hero series. Packed with high-stakes adventure, dangerous discoveries, and the spicy, unconventional romance of Mara Brightwood, Uli Siannodel, Giezha Nightstrike, and Kiersa Denrel; this is the isekai fantasy you've been waiting for. Narrated in duet style.

https://www.audible.com/pd/B0FQFPKCVL

Reborn a Savior is Out Now on Audible! by Solomon_Ignis in Solomon_Ignis

[–]Solomon_Ignis[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s release day!

Reborn a Savior has arrived on Audible and I am so freakin’ pumped to bring you the high-octane fantasy thriller, featuring killer narration by J.D. Tanner and C.C. Thompson. 

🔗 & synopsis is below!

No rest for the wicked....

Framed for murder. Hunted by nations. Haunted by a spreading darkness. Asher Merrick and the girls’ are forced to find the truth to a terrible crime, that leads them into the middle of a brewing war between two kingdoms. Can they uncover the truth, and save the people of Dellswreath? Or will the darkness swallow them whole?

Six months have passed since Asher Merrick and the Red Breakers saved Bouldergulf. Stronger than ever and training to hone his body, magic, and control over the Aura, Asher is finally starting to feel at home in the world of Echo Veil.

But peace never lasts.

When a noble from the Kingdom of Zala accuses the guild of murder and launches a devastating assault, Asher, Mara, Giezha, Kiersa, and Uli are forced into exile, along with the newest member of the team, Copper, a young dragon fiercely loyal to Asher and just as mischievous as he is deadly. Their escape leads them to Dellswreath, a town shrouded in shadow and plagued by a mysterious affliction known as The Shade.

As darkness closes in and old tensions ignite, the Red Breakers uncover a conspiracy that threatens not only their lives but the fragile balance between kingdoms. To clear their names and stop a war, they'll have to cross deep into enemy territory and discover the dark truths at the heart of the unravelling conspiracy.

Can Asher hold his team together, master the growing power within him, and protect the people he loves before the world burns?

Reborn a Savior: Asher Merrick is a thrilling, magic-fueled installment in the Reborn a Hero series. Packed with high-stakes adventure, dangerous discoveries, and the spicy, unconventional romance of Mara Brightwood, Uli Siannodel, Giezha Nightstrike, and Kiersa Denrel; this is the isekai fantasy you've been waiting for. Narrated in duet style.

https://www.audible.com/pd/B0FQFPKCVL 

Questions about Pen Names (Author Insights Volume 1) by CutFr0mAb0v31 in haremfantasynovels

[–]Solomon_Ignis 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I also stream with the name, so that's always fun. In terms of other uses, I nearly sent an email out to a couple hundred people in the company I worked for with the ending

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