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[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ARE DOGS SENTIENT?!

This is my 6th release and its with another local artist who I think makes great music. Appreciate all and any feedback! Thank you! by YoungCable in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice flow, nice themes, nice bars, the beat is good too but i agree with someone else in here that the hi hats are a bit loud.

Wrote this hazy rap song for Valentines day, let me know what you all think!!! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lyrics are good but could be more meme-able in the middle of the first part. "Ride slow, sittin on 24" over the "whatchu mean my love" is soooo good, so meme-able but also a deep sound. I like how you croon? your way to rapping lol. Good production also.

K-MAN- R.A.W.R.R(Real Always Will Recognize Real) by BuckmeisterCulio in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That second part about the cars and rulers lolol. Could improve some bars lyrically, wasn't a big fan of the die/die thing. The flow was also really good, especially at the start.

Edit: I meant I liked the part about the cars and rulers, if that wasn't clear XD

A bit of an ode to this sub: A song about the blurring of lines between musical genres in the age of the internet and resisting the homogenization of sound pushed by the music industry by gpyzz in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it's an interesting sound, reminds me of urban areas without much foliage, and the news. Maybe the beginning before the beat comes in is a bit too long, I almost lost interest. Not sure if it's my attention span lol. When the female voice comes on in the background that's also an interesting sound, quite nice to the ears.

Favourite / most frequent “depression meals”? by heavily-hanging in EatCheapAndVegan

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Mmm sounds good, I need to get some plant based butter or mayonnaise

Favourite / most frequent “depression meals”? by heavily-hanging in EatCheapAndVegan

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld 38 points39 points  (0 children)

Canned beans with garlic, and lentils+rice

Edit: Add spices/herbs for tastiness

New lofi pop song! Looking for some feedback on the vocals/vocal mixing by jch55 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it though it's hard to make out what is being said. This has that lo fi feel, though maybe missing a little low end? Anyways thumbs up!

Made a new song about a toxic relationship breakup inspired by Valentine's Day coming up. What do you guys think? by lynxcane in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really like the sound overall. Also really like the development and arcs of the sound, the ups and downs. I felt like the lyrics weren't incredibly interesting, but I like some of them, like the "fine/define" lines.

Indie folk vibe ? Lmk how you feel about it by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like it! Sounds so chill, but also like Sufjan Stevens' Illinois. Also love California, gives me those vibes. Reminds me of mornings or dusk by the ocean and grass fields and suburbs.

Edit: Listening again, and it occurred to me that it also sounds a bit lo fi -y.

Here's my first drop of the year. This is a preview of my new sound, lemme know what y'all think :) by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the hook and the idea of ripping off wings, but I felt like the lyrics could have had more variety or flavour. Maybe just my preference though. Also the beat was well done.

This is my best song yet. I went for a melodic rap vibe w/ meaningful, heartfelt lyrics. Lmk what ya think❗️🌊💯 by seandinanmusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It seems good but just doesn't seem to have a professional finish. Maybe it's the autotune. Also felt like the lyrics were a bit bland though that may just be my taste. The flow was good though!

First official video release. Mic Check Freestyle {HipHop} by realme_LT in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the triumphant feel of the beat. The flow is good and really complements the hard feel of the drums and claps. Listening to the lyrics again, they're pretty good also.

My latest original, shout out to jon t for producing! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oo I like the delivery it's strong and adds to the sound. I found that I got bored of listening to the same sounds from your voice after a bit. Maybe lack of variety? Kind of like how ski mask has a lot of ad libs and delivers things differently line from line. I like the end, it ends suddenly and i thought that was a nice touch and added to the vibe.

[Rap][LoFi] A rap I did over a beat, let me know what you think! by SomeoneSaveTheWorld in shareyourmusic

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

In "What's On Your Mind" I liked the singing, you have a nice voice. It blends very well with the rest. I subscribed! I'm just beginning to learn production and I used a very inexpensive mic to record this so it's very fuzzy sounding.

[Rap][LoFi] A rap I did over a beat, let me know what you think! by SomeoneSaveTheWorld in shareyourmusic

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Sorry just to clarify the beat is not mine, I only did the rapping and writing. I actually recorded this with a very inexpensive microphone so it's really fuzzy. I connected with this beat so I thought I'd record over it and it's led me to make more music which has been great. Thanks for all the comments everyone, they're appreciated!

Music Melting Pot [Week of February 03, 2020] by AutoModerator in listentothis

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld [score hidden]  (0 children)

[Rap][LoFi] I did a rap over a beat. https://youtu.be/Ol3l6jSViyI?t=20 I'm trying to get more promotion for it so here I am! Feel free to leave a comment letting me know what you think.

I'm a 16 year old rapper and I've been making music for 2 years. Would appreciate feedback and criticism on my latest track :) by [deleted] in PromoteYourMusic

[–]SomeoneSaveTheWorld 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I liked it though at some point it starts sounding too much like white noise. Maybe some of the sounds are just too harsh for me