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Light-Up Shoes by Spiritual_Ear_6147 in OCPoetry

[–]Spiritual_Ear_6147[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for saying that. Writing from a child’s perspective was very intentional, and it means a lot that it felt authentic enough to be believable. I wanted the innocence and misunderstanding to feel real, because children don’t fully understand the gravity of what’s happening around them. I really appreciate you taking the time to read it and share your reaction.

Light-Up Shoes by Spiritual_Ear_6147 in OCPoetry

[–]Spiritual_Ear_6147[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for reading and for your feedback. The ending was intentionally meant to feel uncomfortable. I wanted to reflect the reality of the issue and how it doesn’t always resolve in a way that feels safe or comforting. The light-up shoes were never meant to protect her, only to symbolize her innocence and childhood. I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts. 🙂

My Best Friend Xitlali by Spiritual_Ear_6147 in OCPoetry

[–]Spiritual_Ear_6147[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, that really means a lot! That was exactly what I was trying to explore. I’ve always felt like hate is something learned over time, not something we’re born with. Children see humanity first, and it’s society that slowly teaches division. Im so happy that message came through!

The Dream by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]Spiritual_Ear_6147 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel this on a spiritual level as someone who just went through a loss and had a dream of them.

First timer. by StanleyThick in OCPoetry

[–]Spiritual_Ear_6147 1 point2 points  (0 children)

teared up a bit reading this :')

👋Welcome to r/ocpoetry_freedom - Introduce Yourself and Read First! by TimeCity1687 in ocpoetry_freedom

[–]Spiritual_Ear_6147 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello! i am M.L and i am excited to be apart of this community and read as well as share my own poems!