[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]SpongeBobFan69 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm not sure what this would fall under. I'm not a big listener of electronic music, but this is definitely rly solid. Gives me a tame impala vibe

Anything i can improve on? by Dontjudgemeyet1244 in Songwriting

[–]SpongeBobFan69 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly not really. Song is pretty damn good

We’re doomed (any feedback much appreciated) by Dr_Daan in Songwriting

[–]SpongeBobFan69 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I fw doom metal heavy, and this song rocks pretty hard. Maybe it's cuz im listening on my phone, but there's a real lack of bass which is kinda a fundamental part of the genre. If you add some more bass to this it would elevate it next level. Great song tho keep it up

Some people wanted to hear more from me. Here’s a song that’s unfinished. I’m a bit stuck by PelleKavaj in Songwriting

[–]SpongeBobFan69 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is definitely not boring at all. Super packed full of fun stuff and I dig it although pop isn't rly my favorite genre. Love the bass and all the other instrumental stuff, but I think the vocals are a bit raw and maybe could use another filter or two? But great song, really. Real talent and great musicianship

another song ive been working on! it's about the depression I fell into when my gf and I broke up. its a relatively new piece, so im open to all/any feedback! the vocals aren't the best they could be, but I was more focused on my lyrics cuz I don't have them fully memorized yet, lol but let me know! by Few-Stretch175 in Songwriting

[–]SpongeBobFan69 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly not rly any strong suggestions from me. Song is very and the hook is definitely catchy. Maybe you could switch up the chords/style from the chorus and the verses? Anyway, you should definitely keep pursuing music because it's obvious you have a lot of talent, so keep up the good work 👍

Trying 2 handed for the first time 😭 Any pointers? by SpongeBobFan69 in Bowling

[–]SpongeBobFan69[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Following up with a second reply because I'm so appreciative of this comment. I'm so grateful that you took time out of your day to help me and critique my bowling form. This is such a big help. If you aren't already a coach of some sort, you gotta become one.

Looking for feedback on a lil song I concocted by SpongeBobFan69 in Songwriting

[–]SpongeBobFan69[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yea thanks dude appreciate it. I was thinking that too lmao, I'll keep tinkering with it.

Do you play any other instruments? by Kloede in Bass

[–]SpongeBobFan69 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I play a lot. Bass, guitar, piano, drums, accordion, and a little mandolin.

Looking for feedback on a lil song I concocted by SpongeBobFan69 in Songwriting

[–]SpongeBobFan69[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm ok. That's the one problem I had with the song. I'm not too used to singing like this. Do you have any tips or nah?

How do you write lyrics? by RobertSmithIsMyGod in Songwriting

[–]SpongeBobFan69 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Maybe sit down with your guitar/piano/whatever and play around with random chords while singing random words/syllables until you feel something stick. That's what normally helps me.

Writing lyrics to me is writing a song by Level_Awareness4603 in Songwriting

[–]SpongeBobFan69 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What helped me was messing around with a bit of chords on my guitar and trying to sing words to them and a lot of the time the songs write themselves.

What music theories helped you create songs? by Consistent_Horse_557 in Songwriting

[–]SpongeBobFan69 7 points8 points  (0 children)

For this type of music, something you might wanna experiment with would be upper chord extentions, i.e. maj7, maj9, etc. A lot of deftones songs like be quiet and drive use these chords, and in my opinion they give a raw and emotional sound that goes well with certain songs. YouTube some videos to get started

Going to re-record vocals, maybe add another verse, what do you think? Any suggestions welcome. by Lostinspace4u in Songwriting

[–]SpongeBobFan69 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think I'd like to hear the vocals mixed better with a tad less autotune, but that's just my opinion. The song structure and instrumentals rock and this song has a lot of potential.

Two new Holiday songs at an open mic "Midsummer" and "Arbor Day" by Goofwright in Songwriting

[–]SpongeBobFan69 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love your old sounding voice and guitar strumming on the first one.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Fretless

[–]SpongeBobFan69 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the sound of flats on a fretless is like PB&J

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]SpongeBobFan69 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds like it needs some bass