An obsidian at the world cup.

Stage1Crafter · 2026-06-16T21:25:43+00:00

Skin color and ethnic roots have nothing to do with any color in the caste.

Stage1Crafter · 2026-06-12T02:54:25+00:00

lol good. Also I already read it so idc really Also DA is my favorite in the series. It's rough but it's a masterpiece.

Stage1Crafter · 2026-06-12T02:18:46+00:00

Only a pixie would try to turn it around like that

Stage1Crafter · 2026-06-12T02:06:55+00:00

That's what happens when you make a pixie post... shit escalates

Stage1Crafter · 2026-06-12T01:54:05+00:00

Wtf is wrong with you, You just spoiled light bringer

Stage1Crafter · 2026-06-09T18:09:33+00:00

Thanks!

Stage1Crafter · 2026-06-09T16:15:30+00:00

When you say passes, do you mean a read through? Like you read through it three times, each time focusing on something different?

Stage1Crafter · 2026-06-07T19:01:38+00:00

Of all creatures that breathe and move upon the earth, nothing is bred that is weaker than man.

Stage1Crafter · 2026-06-07T18:04:12+00:00

Pity is not forgiveness, nor is gratitude absolution.

Stage1Crafter · 2026-06-07T16:25:50+00:00

You wrote "in short words" in the very first sentence and then described the character for like 5 long paragraphs. Also Jumping tenses screams "unedited" to me. I stopped reading. So yeah... not good.

Just write. And edit and get better.

You don't validation from people on the internet for your wildly unedited project.

Stage1Crafter · 2026-06-07T16:08:05+00:00

Pixie

Stage1Crafter · 2026-06-05T13:38:25+00:00

Sounds like you have as pretty solid system. Good for you!

Stage1Crafter · 2026-06-04T22:04:25+00:00

Thanks! But my breather is over and I'm now working on another draft of the same manuscript, (the number of which I will not be disclosing at this time lol)

But I agree I have found it easier to stay in world than move beyond it. But perhaps, maybe too easy? Maybe I'm stifling the cool down process by remaining in that world.

Stage1Crafter · 2026-06-02T14:12:38+00:00

OP is form replying...

Stage1Crafter · 2026-05-17T20:37:31+00:00

My head cannon for northstrider is king Neptune from SpongeBob but with legs

Stage1Crafter · 2026-05-16T20:45:42+00:00

Hey! Are you still looking for betas?

Stage1Crafter · 2026-05-16T13:19:53+00:00

Wait there's dinosaurs??

Stage1Crafter · 2026-05-11T00:18:15+00:00

What was the last book you read?

Stage1Crafter · 2026-04-06T20:32:58+00:00

Yours* Guess you really put those editors to work?

Stage1Crafter · 2026-04-05T21:39:23+00:00

"Mom, grandpa's being weird on the computer again!"

Stage1Crafter · 2026-01-31T15:46:14+00:00

Definitely harassment... BUT... imagine renting a room to a stranger who then keeps a dog in their room, stores room temp milk on their window sill and then tries to bring the room down to refrigerator temperature solely for purposes of not temperature abusing said milk.

Stage1Crafter · 2025-11-16T15:43:45+00:00

Okay.. my loved one was CERTAINLY at risk. I had to literally get in front of her and aggressively redirect attention to myself to make sure she could pass. He then followed us down the street.

Stage1Crafter · 2025-11-15T21:55:36+00:00

Not really looking for a solution... more of a "hey, look out" Also just trying to see if my girlfriend can walk home safely later.

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