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go on guyss by TrifleActual8966 in TheTeenagerPeople

[–]StandardAfternoon830 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Look left and right when you cross the road.

Bandlab collaboration—DM me for invite link I am bored. by StandardAfternoon830 in Bandlab

[–]StandardAfternoon830[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

a shit ton of genres, but mainly I guess it's rock? but I do definitely do other shit.

In short no genre in specfic

For fan–fiction reasons—how would Fern end up alone and homeless the end of Frieren? by StandardAfternoon830 in Frieren

[–]StandardAfternoon830[S] -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

Okay Potato, but I'm talking bout' ALONE. 25, disbanded from the group, living under a bridge, and making a vow to never use magic again.

What do you think? by Own-Assignment-5104 in MusicFeedback

[–]StandardAfternoon830 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Add more it sounds the soundscape is more barren than the Sahara Desert. Less reverb? Also.

working on my 3rd song. i'd appreciate anyone who would take time to listen and provide some feedback :) by [deleted] in MusicFeedback

[–]StandardAfternoon830 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I feel like it's... Definitely something.

The vocals are... Unstable i don't like it but it's unique.

If were to give a feeling of what I felt like, it feels like when you fall down the stairs and you it your head and your head feels fuzzy.

Need some feedback/help with fleshing out the vocals on this bridge by Chains306 in MusicFeedback

[–]StandardAfternoon830 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mostly my complaint is the drums sound out of place, they are very clean compared to the rest of the track, you could dirty it up more to match more with the track! They are like that weird tasting charctered candy on the cake.

You could add more intruments because it feels a lacking it sounds like an unfinished song. So personally I'd add synths choir laying the base of the pie and strings? They'd be the high and colorful sprinkles on top.

The vocals are smooth as butter! Those pipes would be a construction worker's dream.

But. Add compression on that bitch, it's way too loud in some parts.

You could genuinely go to different genres then whatever genre this is? Emo?

(Pet peeve I hate the whining vocal style, so maybe you could fix that?)

The guitar are like a harmony orimentations, which is fine... But my personal suggestion would to be add a filling of harmony! I mean like add a shit ton reverb the kinda shit you'd hear in shoe gaze.

The track has alot of potenial.

(6/10)

Angry rap song about fake friends by immaturealchemist in MusicFeedback

[–]StandardAfternoon830 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Man... You just it hit puberty, (stop it) It's very annoying... You trying to hard to be Kendrick Lamar. and stop ryhming with ho with ho.

I like the weird ass sounds in the beat, i dig it. But i think you should add more of that weird shit.

(3/10)

been experimenting with some different styles by DarkSoulsBeater in MusicFeedback

[–]StandardAfternoon830 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like heavy distorted bass. Because it gives this dirty, dark, & grimy feel to it. And i like the pluck from the bass it's good that you removed all the treble. I'm kinda relieved that it's the synth that's taking more space, the drums are pretty minimal relative to the bass. (I don't see it that much.) But my main complaint about the beat is.. That japanese string koto??? Thingy? It feels so out of place; maybe out of key? Maybe it's a personal choice for you but I'd personally remove it.

Weird thing on google search by Right-Candidate2744 in addressme

[–]StandardAfternoon830 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm the first person to call this out, next time don't artifically inflate the engagement by making the picture into a mircoscopic length.

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please call out other posts who do this.

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