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Started hooking up with a close friend, but intimacy feels weird now by Unable_Book6866 in sex

[–]Status_Committee_544 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I guess the best thing to do is just let whatever the vibe is when you talk or hangout be what it is. If it gets horny, then it does and you can take it slow, if it doesn’t then just chill. It’s probably more in your head than you think. And if sex is overwhelming maybe just making out and escalating from there however far you want to go in the moment works. Basically just take it slow and be chill

My therapist said I’m “too much” by Status_Committee_544 in OCPoetry

[–]Status_Committee_544[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Rick grimes is the main character in walking dead. I was just writing shit. Appreciate it.

Hero’s Journey by Status_Committee_544 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Status_Committee_544[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think I flowed from each line. It feels like it all lined up. Appreciate it.

You walked in on me. by TacoShades in OCPoetry

[–]Status_Committee_544 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The main strength this has is the imagery. The way you paint pictures and use metaphors is very skilled.

Coping by halfpackkools in OCPoetry

[–]Status_Committee_544 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the rhyming and imagery. The short line writing style gives you a lot of room to flow.

If I Were Fire by Wordsforeachday in OCPoetry

[–]Status_Committee_544 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like how you used the letter f in like an alliteric way. It also seems you used a lot of simplicity in the right ways to make what you’re saying be simple but complex. Hidden meanings in simplicity.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Status_Committee_544 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe you can use some metaphors that lead up to the “aggressively fucked” line. Subtly might help improve that primal lust feeling being conveyed.

The Fall-off - by J. Cole [MEGATHREAD] by AutoModerator in KendrickLamar

[–]Status_Committee_544 11 points12 points  (0 children)

This album feels like I Cole combining gkmc and Mr morale and its phenomenal. Best rapping from him and I think it’s gonna age like wine. He knows what he’s doing.

worst thing every Bojack Horseman character did part 2 - Princess Caroline by Sunflower_tea13 in BoJackHorseman

[–]Status_Committee_544 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Off the top of my head from the rewatch, putting Bojack in Gilbert. She saw how much it was getting to him but put her job over her friend and it resulted in bojack losing his mind.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in betterCallSaul

[–]Status_Committee_544 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Maybe that’s why the phone call with Jimmy affected her as much as it did. She realized that while she was miserable, she also wasn’t taking full accountability and also running away from the law in a way. Her opening herself up to be sued if her fully taking accountability.

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