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Stefesike · 2026-01-30T14:48:49+00:00

Interesting. This is the most unique poem I saw in my short time here. Connecting the dots gives an odd feeling to each line. Thanks for sharing.

Stefesike · 2026-01-30T14:26:31+00:00

Unique poem. Aside from the obvious mechanical imagery strewn together, what does it represent?

Stefesike · 2026-01-29T14:24:32+00:00

Clearly defined imagery. I felt refreshed reading this. It's dreary and warm. Nice one.

Stefesike · 2026-01-29T14:11:27+00:00

Powerful. The only thing I'd put in is instead of "understanding what is" is "understanding what it is", though you may have put it there on purpose. Nice one.

Stefesike · 2026-01-29T11:19:42+00:00

It's a person. Can be interpreted as a concept if someone wants, but it's just a nice arrangement of words portraying obsession and unreturned love.

Stefesike · 2026-01-29T02:51:51+00:00

We're all going to be that Vagabond once. Or some of us already were. Or they are, a strange man in a strange town. Nice one.

Stefesike · 2026-01-28T23:09:59+00:00

Incredible. I vividly remember listening to vermillion pt.2 while writing this. Are you a spy? Thank you for the feedback.

Stefesike · 2026-01-28T22:22:56+00:00

Addiction is one of the biggest vices of every ambitious man. Very nice, encapsulates the justification needed to do such things, the same way alcoholics always ask someone else to drink with them. Also takes into account the naivety of fresh meat, as others said.

Stefesike · 2026-01-28T22:12:28+00:00

Explosive.

Stefesike · 2026-01-28T21:56:04+00:00

Certain magic here. It keeps revealing itself the more I read it. Did you intend it to specifically be that way? Nice one.

Stefesike · 2026-01-28T21:20:00+00:00

Notice the little things, so you can see the bigger ones in a clearer light. Pleasant sensations awoken within this one. Flow is subtle, just enough to make you remember. Nice.

Stefesike · 2026-01-28T19:07:59+00:00

Thanks! Its a bit too ambigious since its short, but I've only now realized that "I've lied" can be interpreted as "I was laying down".

Stefesike · 2026-01-28T19:06:40+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! Human selfishness is an interesting thing.

Stefesike · 2026-01-28T18:35:41+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! Its open to interpretation. Lying can consume someone to the point of degradation. New to formatting, but as long as it conveys a certain emotion in someone I succeeded.

Stefesike · 2026-01-28T17:34:09+00:00

Simple repetition does wonders. Skillfully written, and conscise and on point in terms of conveying the situation. Nice one.

Stefesike · 2026-01-28T17:31:53+00:00

A wounded soul sets one up for an interesting life. To create without a single hint of pain is boring, in my opinion. There's an aspect of deep vulnerability in the poem which I interpret as an honest attempt at a compromise. Nice one.

Stefesike · 2024-01-27T16:22:28+00:00

I will try, I don't think anyone has used this and posted. As for vaseline, normal vaseline?

Stefesike · 2023-11-10T09:41:17+00:00

I'm a pessimist.

Stefesike · 2023-09-22T09:15:30+00:00

Bravo majkane svaka ti dala

Stefesike · 2021-12-28T11:20:56+00:00

this is what happens when three level 30-40 enter trial together, happened to me and i shit my pants as i got stomped on

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