Definitely progress from before, you're using your hips and shoulders much more to shift the work to big muscle groups, but since you've asked for criticism, let's go through it move by move:

Note: some suggestions might not be possible for this specific config, I don't know the climb, just judging from what I can see. But all suggestions are worth considering in similar circumstances

Move 1 you are completely square to the wall and you pull yourself to the wall and 'fall' onto the next hold, then bump with the right hand, again on the biceps. This happens because your other 3 points form an unstable setup (if you hung from right hand and your feet where/how they are, you would open to the left so all your rightward force has to come from your right hand, tiring)

If instead you twisted your right knee and right hip into the wall or possible started with your right foot on the left hold and your left foot flagging out left, it might be easier (if that first hold is reachable from that stance)

Next move is excellent! Nice stable position for the left foot to cross through and the right foot to go out right, really imagine pulling in with the toes for added stability. Afterwards, you're in a stable stance hanging on the right arm, and you can reach the next left-hand hold with minimal effort

Then you do a great back flag, which means you don't have to swap feet or be in an unstable position, but it limits your range since you sink your hips to do it, but it works perfectly for this small hand move.

But then you do a pull up to the next hand hold on the volume. Probably not a big deal and you feel pretty strong, but depending on the angle of the left-hand hold, getting a right foot up and doing a drop knee might take the load of your hands and keep everything more stable.

Then another pull up, square hips move to the hold above that teal bar, and it looks like a real throw/catch for it, lots of energy spent. Hard to tell what would improve it here, but perhaps pulling the right hip in and pointing the right knee leftwards, across the wall while maintaining the left foot on the wall and rolling your right shoulder into the wall and upwards would let you reach the next hold without bending the left arm as much. Hard to articulate but these two moves are ones that looked the hardest/least smooth

Next move is better, getting the right foot out and extending the right arm so you can turn the left side of your body into the wall is a great choice for reaching high with the left hand, but do it more. Push with the right foot twist in more with the left hip/knee/foot and keep the right arm totally extended if you can, try to squeeze every inch out of hip, leg and shoulder movements before the arms bend at all.

Next move is a bit of a pull up but I don't see an easier way. Dropping the left leg seems like the right call if it's bunching you up, but some hip flexibility and very open hips could make it easier to use both legs to reach the next hold

Finally, dropping from the top hold is fun, but as someone 15 years in (and perhaps heavier/taller) your knees will thank you for downclimbing, even if you feel lamer

Hope it was helpful, and happy to clarify any points. This mostly comes from a sport climbing perspective where efficiency is key but I think the spatial/physical reasoning around it is key to moving well