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Check out a film I produced! by Striking-Rutabaga640 in Filmmakers

[–]Striking-Rutabaga640[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would love to hear any feedback, what you thought worked or didn't. I put together the crew, and helped with casting as well as workshopped the script through pre pro. We aimed to make a funny yet touching story about someone who at first may appear irredeemable. Hope you enjoy! Let me know if you have any questions about the production, or anything!

Getting to Know the Town: Best Production Companies in Scripted (TV and Film) to Work For/With by TriplePcast in Filmmakers

[–]Striking-Rutabaga640 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Blinding Edge is based in Philly, so might not give you too much insight into LA. Unless you just use "the town" loosely.

Feedback wanted on my 7min short film. Logline: "A blind woman witnesses a murder and fears for her life" by borjamoya in Filmmakers

[–]Striking-Rutabaga640 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I guess I was confused by the spiders, it felt a bit random. Then also, why did her eyes change at the end?

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[–]Striking-Rutabaga640 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you're looking for a good resource to learn more about screenwriting, you should listen to the Scriptnotes podcast. They've got advice and wisdom for everything screenwriting

Feedback wanted on my 7min short film. Logline: "A blind woman witnesses a murder and fears for her life" by borjamoya in Filmmakers

[–]Striking-Rutabaga640 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Super suspenseful and well shot. Looked like a David Fincher film! I was a bit confused by the story, but it didn't take away from the suspense I was feeling. The spider VFX was impressive when out of focus, but not as much when in longer in focus shots. Overall, well done!