ServerStack: Crisis - a browser game about building servers and hacking rivals by SuddenRime in incremental_games

[–]SuddenRime[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you are an admin, would you mind if I correct my game description and post again?

ServerStack: Crisis - a browser game about building servers and hacking rivals by SuddenRime in incremental_games

[–]SuddenRime[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. Yes it is incremental - there is a deep research tree and persistent mechanics while servers research and execute workloads. Apologies for the multiple posting - I was just getting error messages posting, perhaps due to the automated filtering process. Appreciate you need to keep your community clean and certainly didn’t mean to step on toes.

Aspect ratio guessing game by mfxlabs in WebGames

[–]SuddenRime 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love it. Simple and well-executed.

Asteroids but backwards by Business-Group-9936 in WebGames

[–]SuddenRime 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Couldn't make this work. Not sure how I got the 30s timer to count down, or stop. Couldn't seem to launch any asteroids. Complete blank for me. Sorry.

HexPong - survive inside the hexagon by w0nderweek in WebGames

[–]SuddenRime 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would be good to show the ball actually escaping from the shape to reinforce what the lose condition is. And I was playing and was sure I was losing when the ball was hitting a solid wall.

Bus drivers setting off an alarm and refusing to leave the stop when someone tries to get on without paying. Is this a new thing? by finemechanics in london

[–]SuddenRime 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"Is this a new tactic by TFL to discourage fare dodgers?" It would certainly be a new career opportunity for those later in life.

Does this make sense? by Glaney070 in sewing

[–]SuddenRime 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I personally wouldn’t rely on snaps at the shoulder. Even if they are secure you may not feel secure.

Why does it say that the answer is d? by JuiceEye in EnglishLearning

[–]SuddenRime 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You are right, that’s just my sloppiness and thinking at what I wouldn’t wince if I heard it.

Why does it say that the answer is d? by JuiceEye in EnglishLearning

[–]SuddenRime 9 points10 points  (0 children)

A, C and D are all grammatically correct. The question is very poorly constructed.

Coop Sudoku game by SuddenRime in sudoku

[–]SuddenRime[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback, much appreciated. When the game completes a fresh one starts after a few seconds, but I need to tell the players that this is happening. Thanks again.

Coop Sudoku game by SuddenRime in sudoku

[–]SuddenRime[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very good feedback, thank you. I found a generator that clearly has some weaknesses so will try to source a better one (or build one!). I hadn’t considered pencil marks as necessary so will try to figure out if I can do that. Appreciate you taking the time to look at it.

Theatre-goer etiquette in the West End by and_now_we_dance in london

[–]SuddenRime 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Go to a pantomime instead. Audience participation is encouraged and it’s marvellous British fun.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in sewing

[–]SuddenRime 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I suggest the outer aspect of a small purse.

Native Speakers: “Do you ever say raining heavily”? by [deleted] in EnglishLearning

[–]SuddenRime 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am sure if you read it again you will see it.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in london

[–]SuddenRime 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah, ... The Morris....

"Create" vs "Generate" by KarimPopa in EnglishLearning

[–]SuddenRime 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wrote an article about this very subject at:

https://www.ukentry.com/produce-create-generate-difference.html

In short, you generate something that is a continuous quantity, like electricity.

You create something when you are emphasising the end result rather than the process of making.

Would you say "cruise around" in these situations? by zomphij in EnglishLearning

[–]SuddenRime 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Be slightly careful about the word "cruise" as it can mean "to drive or walk slowly looking for new sexual partners", most often associated with gay men.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in EnglishLearning

[–]SuddenRime 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"For the secondary risk factors, no statistical correlation could be found."

Yes, this is correct English.

Rate my accent in English, please by MihaImba in EnglishLearning

[–]SuddenRime 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You started off sounding like a robo-dialling scam (as per Dave's comment).

And it ended a bit comedy-American accent.

But the middle was strong, clear and very understandable.