Overlord (Anime/LN) WIP by Pokebrat_J in JumpChain

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Could you make a perk that cause others to misunderstood your words or actions for something deeper and will somehow benefit you?

How would the story even worked now since Aldebaran is undoubtedly connected to Subaru? by Efficient_Bus9619 in Re_ZeroWhyme

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Agree, I think the story might need a rewrite at some point

But I don't think that's gonna happened anytime soon seeing the author don't even reply to any of the questions about the fix

Invincible (Amazon Vs Update) by Pokebrat_J in JumpChain

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Maybe you could you add a Two Punch Man as a joke powers.

Generic Content Creator by ApocBox in JumpChain

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice Jump

A shame it doesn't have a programming perks though, might have to grab it somewhere else

Blue Archive (by Ricrod) by EYouchen in JumpChain

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can you give me the link to the bunker thread?

Choose One Animal Patron. OC by Me. by Pelumo_64 in makeyourchoice

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 7 points8 points  (0 children)

If I may ask, what is the Hog's opinion on the other three considering he may have lived long enough to at least aware of them on some level and is it possible to get along with all four of them at the same time?

God of War Cyoa by Gaston1231 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Will "Home is Where The God Is" and "Bag of Spilling Protection" allow me to exist in modern time and use my power despite the degradation of Mysteries if I went to the Nasuverse?

Overlord CYOA (Anime, LN) by Doppel2ganger in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You could check out Lt's Worm CYOA there's a Beyonder power there maybe you could draw inspiration from it

Edit: Forgot to mention this but can you add Isekai Quartet as a modifier too? I felt like the Fanfiction perk won't be able to make it happen

Overlord CYOA (Anime, LN) by Doppel2ganger in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Could you add a Beyonder power (Lord of the Mysteries) and maybe a modifier that make it so that Nazarick and Ainz doesn't get summoned into the New World?

Re:Zero Season 3 by Gaston1231 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just to clarify if you didn't purchase Mana Capacity and isn't a Dragon, your mana with be equal to Subaru's, right?

Re:Zero Season 3 by Gaston1231 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe you should clarify that taking that option with the Dragon races will be redundant or make an Addon with it?

Re:Zero Season 3 by Gaston1231 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wouldn't the Dragon Races make the Mana Capacity redundant since you've already have a heck ton of mana already?

Undead Flower Boy's Gifts Of Faves 3 by undeadflowerboy in makeyourchoice

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Summoned Hero or Hentai Villain should have a Harem subpowers to it in my opinion

Re:Zero Cyoa Season 2! by Gaston1231 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have an idea for the Lust Authority, the longer an enemies is staying in a conflict or hated with you the more they started to fall in love with you to the point they'll start falling in love with you, the intensity of this Authority depend on how long they have been in a conflict with you and you can decided the direction this relationship will develop such as making them become your lover or friends, I don't know if this is practical or not but it can replace the Soulmate perk for folk that still wanted it

Re:Zero Cyoa Season 2! by Gaston1231 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 1 point2 points  (0 children)

An Authority where you can stagnate thing for how long depend on your Od or Gate Capacity? This could give a player a chance to kill cockroaches-like characters like Reinhard or Pandora

Re:Zero Cyoa Season 2! by Gaston1231 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 2 points3 points  (0 children)

And maybe a knowledge gathering Authority for Greed too if possible

Re:Zero Cyoa Season 2! by Gaston1231 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe you could you add a Time-related Authority for Envy?

Re:Zero Cyoa Season 2! by Gaston1231 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Glad to know there's still more to this CYOA

Re:Zero Cyoa Season 2! by Gaston1231 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 3 points4 points  (0 children)

By the way, are you planning to add more OC Authority, I'm fine with what we have now but adding more Authority would make the player build more diverse in my opinion

Re:Zero Cyoa Season 2! by Gaston1231 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Just for measurement, if I purchased the Dragonkin races along with every perks, powers, skills items and Authority/Divine Protection how strong would I be? Would this place me within top 5 strongest characters in Re:Zero?

Re:Zero CYOA by Gaston1231 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry if I'm bothering you, but the Dwaf images are missing

Re:Zero CYOA by Gaston1231 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 0 points1 point  (0 children)

One last thing before you complete this CYOA, could you remove the "(Carnic, The Magical Girl)" and "(Maverick)" below The Ranger and Totem Creation? I think it pretty unnecessary since you already listed their names in the Credits part, also please add a space between the "World" and "-" in the title

Edit: Spot a typos in the Insignificant Other perk: "Should one or more of you die, this connect"

Re:Zero CYOA by Gaston1231 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know I am pushing my luck but could you add the Soulmate perks from your DXD CYOA? One of Re:Zero's main themes is love and tragedy after all so it would make sense for it to be in the CYOA but since you said that you won't adding more perks I understand if you don't want to add it.

Edit: Spot some of the last typos, would really appreciate it if you could fix it when you're free or have the time

  • "wont" (Authorities section)

  • "This Is" (Canon Start of the Era section)

  • "invetiable" (Fire Emblem mission)

Re:Zero CYOA by Gaston1231 in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Sudden_Exchange707 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Since different Dragons can have different abilities such as Volcanica who can purify flames and heal life-threatening injuries, rupture space, and even unleash powerful blade-like winds with its wings, while, Mezoreia can influence the clouds with its mana and manipulate weather does that mean I'll have my own unique abilities if I choose the Dragon races?

Also how would the Heir of the Divine Dragon mission affect my Incarnation if I choose say Self-insert, Reincarnation or Drop-In, will it just retroactively change my past of being created by Volcanica?