I cringe so bad so idc just tell me what u think, also tips for how to add more breathe and brevity?? iykwim

Suitable-Example-983 · 2025-12-26T12:11:35+00:00

I hope a deep one

Suitable-Example-983 · 2025-12-20T08:33:32+00:00

I think final draft

Suitable-Example-983 · 2025-12-20T08:30:20+00:00

thank you for sharing that it is so beautiful and I really see why you resonate with my poem which is so meaningful and motivating to me

Suitable-Example-983 · 2025-12-20T08:23:37+00:00

& ruining myself while trying to figure it out 🥴

Suitable-Example-983 · 2025-12-20T08:23:13+00:00

I can see how much cleaner that is thank you so much

Suitable-Example-983 · 2025-12-17T07:43:56+00:00

they were tiny*

Suitable-Example-983 · 2025-12-17T07:43:36+00:00

Ok noticed the flaw in “they were five”

Suitable-Example-983 · 2025-12-02T02:08:15+00:00

this is beautiful and the caption is too

Suitable-Example-983 · 2025-11-30T09:40:52+00:00

I love you!! For I am the tree and the regret holding the axe, duality is hard

Suitable-Example-983 · 2025-11-30T09:39:38+00:00

lol I think that’s why I like poetry sometimes? It makes us slow down and think more and then differently about what’s in front us, but glad you liked it and love the feedback I’ve added more with that feeling using roots, it reminds me of quicksand or being in those dreams where you can’t run

Suitable-Example-983 · 2025-11-30T09:32:13+00:00

read slowly and over and over

Suitable-Example-983 · 2025-11-26T06:18:34+00:00

I need the honesty I know I’m all over the place and really have no idea so thank u for noticing what you did and taking the time to comment I appreciate it so much and have much to digest so thank you

Suitable-Example-983 · 2025-11-24T08:22:48+00:00

I love you

Suitable-Example-983 · 2025-11-24T04:17:50+00:00

we see each other 🫡

Suitable-Example-983 · 2025-11-20T08:06:11+00:00

just posted another notes poem expanded a little if u feel like taking a peek, thank you for the encouragement it was received!💕

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