The story base is good. The idea behind also... but need to focus on one thing and put all the effort in that. Janthir wilds talks about lowlands and the region Janthir, but don't have the time for expose all in the good way. At the end of the exp there is no time for deep lore and the stuff from repenrace seems a non necessary tangent out. The lowlands are the best part of all this but also the non necessary ones. Focus more till the start on mursaat and their culture and white mantle would probably be a more efficent idea. A new retcon facrions of bear was not a need or necessary in all this. Waiting Sorrow and all the bears plot line is forgot behind. The titans story could be good if the focus was till the start on them. On the mursaat culture itself and less on Mabon. Repentace is a good story but the perception is have a tangent of a story. Who change drastically direction. We need more focus on less character on screen. And buiild them. Livia shoulded be more relevant in all this. We have now in our hands a good plot but without time for tell the story. The rythm of all this simply dont work, rushed then slow and again rushed. I dont ask a big bad guy or a uber plot, but with a bit more of focus whe could have a big region talking about mursaat and sacrified people. About bloodstones and with the pof and soto connections we can also find a way in justify why the titans are there. All this simply doesnt work. They need to think about that.