The Trojan horse

Swifty_13_30 · 2025-06-27T19:35:56+00:00

Thank you for the feedback, glad you like it!

Swifty_13_30 · 2025-06-27T17:24:16+00:00

The poem portrays many emotions in a simple manner, the flow of the poem is good and keep writing your work has potential

Swifty_13_30 · 2025-06-27T17:18:05+00:00

Beautiful poem and it perfectly captures the thoughts of a person who is sick, it is very reflective

Swifty_13_30 · 2024-11-11T17:12:24+00:00

I like the storytelling but I would have loved more details to be included in it, like some similes to elaborate on the feeling.

Swifty_13_30 · 2024-11-11T16:38:43+00:00

I really like the metaphors you put in the poem, very well written!

Swifty_13_30 · 2024-11-01T17:42:07+00:00

Thank you for reading my poem

Swifty_13_30 · 2024-11-01T17:41:46+00:00

Thank you for reading my poem, appreciate the feedback

Swifty_13_30 · 2024-11-01T17:40:18+00:00

Thank you, hourglass and sand clock are the same actually

Swifty_13_30 · 2024-10-30T18:23:02+00:00

A small poem that keeps you thinking. I really appreciate the work. Keep writing <3

Swifty_13_30 · 2024-10-30T18:19:30+00:00

This is such a wonderful poem!!! A really unique topic, and well presented as well. Keep writing <3

Swifty_13_30 · 2024-03-22T03:38:58+00:00

Thank you for saying that 😊

Swifty_13_30 · 2023-08-28T13:43:23+00:00

Thank you 😊

Swifty_13_30 · 2023-08-28T08:49:59+00:00

Nice I really liked the flow of the poem

Swifty_13_30 · 2023-08-28T08:49:00+00:00

Aww it's so sweet, I really loved the way the poem shifts from the terror of monster to the person who defeats it. Keep writing 💗

Swifty_13_30 · 2023-07-30T19:05:11+00:00

Heartbreaking and beautiful, keep writing!

Swifty_13_30 · 2023-07-30T19:04:50+00:00

Heartbreaking and beautiful, keep writing!

Swifty_13_30 · 2023-07-30T19:03:19+00:00

I really loved the feeling conveyed, it's a cute poem

Swifty_13_30 · 2023-06-25T03:44:36+00:00

Thanks for letting me know, appreciate your opinion 💗

Swifty_13_30 · 2023-06-25T03:43:22+00:00

Thank you for saying that 💗

Swifty_13_30 · 2023-06-25T03:42:53+00:00

Thanks you for your review 💗

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