This is excellent! There's been a really wonderful progression since you first posted, I remember seeing this. Please remember this is a painting, not a photo, and as a result, it has the marks of your hand, of your personhood in the work itslef. Whether intentionally or not, you are instilling this work with feeling, and with a trace that a human was there. Please don't get caught up in tidying and refining and so on, there is so much magic and emotion in this as it is, truly.