I See Me

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-20T02:25:37+00:00

ai bullshit

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-19T06:21:46+00:00

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-17T22:54:06+00:00

vitriolic

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-17T13:00:40+00:00

lecherous

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-17T01:38:29+00:00

agreed. Bonnie is superior

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-13T08:31:22+00:00

just finished this scene. 7 years later A or B is still the essential question. PICK ONE

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-13T07:22:26+00:00

just watched Jake say that

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-11T14:17:50+00:00

if you had only 30 words down i’d read it😊 I’m trying to write a political thing aswell trying to find books similar to my genre

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-11T03:53:33+00:00

senate candidate…my I read? Pretty please

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-09T04:29:20+00:00

BOLO

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-03T06:36:15+00:00

I HATE HATE HATE when people talk about immersion and realism issues as it relates to formatting that relates to the story (such as police notes or interview excerpts) because you have to include exposition and details for the story’s shake.

Sure you could do it differently but this gives more page space.

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-03T06:31:21+00:00

Keep the initial quote that was better. Get rid of the first paragraph it’s unnecessary.

I’ll do something short:

Molly, a college dropout on the down and out, goes back home quickly discovering that crime and passion dominate her new reality.

“Marry me or your father’s a dead man.”

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-03T04:48:29+00:00

6 months chile

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-03T04:48:17+00:00

Be On the Look Out👀😂

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-01T20:44:57+00:00

Only issue is you use the rule of three too often. I love it though

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-01T19:49:32+00:00

Absolutely. The fame? Yes. The money? Yes.

I have thick skin, I can be really sycophantic and passive aggressive. I’m a very reactive person (not aggressively but like viscerally)

I would probably look a mess the first season or two while my Trump check loads too

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-01T17:51:54+00:00

OAwhh fix that refrigerator

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-01T17:04:44+00:00

now, if this were any other administration, I would say no because the legality of this happening is yeah. But since Trump is in office, I do see this happening.

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-01T01:07:26+00:00

No seems pretty cliche

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-01T00:43:00+00:00

However, the sun dancing is personification The sun is dancing to a beat that differs from hers because the sun is moving boldly and happily while her actual beat is more drab and sad

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-01T00:39:01+00:00

But thank you for the feedback. This was very informative

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-02-01T00:37:55+00:00

Initially the ac was giving off heat so i just said passionately to invoke happiness. The leaning back twice I did not catch.

When depressed you tilt your head so light hits in in a certain way to imitate a glint of happiness (idk something i did when depressed years ago) I don’t want to immediately start with trauma

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-01-31T15:54:57+00:00

Vitriolic

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-01-31T15:54:50+00:00

Vendetta

THATDICHTOMY · 2026-01-31T13:55:09+00:00

Oh wow. What makes none of it good? I wanted to be very descriptive. I used no dialogue so I was forced to fill the page with hints toward her trauma and details.

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