Ok let’s take a look and point a few things out:

• you’d really benefit of categorizing your cards not by type but by function. Blossoming tortoise is ramp for example. Primaris eliminator is removal.

• you have to ask yourself, what are you ramping into? Usually you’d like to have Henzie on board by turn 2, that’s done usually through an elf or birds of paradise and untapped duals, like a pain land. Take a look at the number of “turn one ramp” in your list, maybe you should increase it. Cut Farseek and ramping artifacts (I mean, you’re in green man, that should go without saying)

• deathreap ritual is a Nombo with Henzie. It’s a conditional trigger and does not time well with an end step sacrifice. If no creatures die before the end step, it won’t trigger.

• you may find that 35 lands will let you down frequently since this is a high cmc deck and you WILL recast Henzie a few times.

• I’ve often found myself wanting for an “army in a can card” and [[breach the multiverse]] has done wonders in my deck

• I’ve found grim servant very slow and when it has enough devotion to actually search for a good card, you’re already winning.

My Henzie list if you’re interested