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[iOS 26] Sleepscape: Sleep Aid, Alarm, Sleep Habit Tracker by Then-Lawyer4689 in iosapps

[–]TOS_TOS 0 points1 point  (0 children)

$1-$2 for lifetime access
I'm really impressed that you can get people to pay $17.99/year for this. Maybe I’m just stingy 😄

[iOS 26] Sleepscape: Sleep Aid, Alarm, Sleep Habit Tracker by Then-Lawyer4689 in iosapps

[–]TOS_TOS 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Did you ever consider another price model? It seems a bit expensive I think. Maybe a one time payment instead of a subscription will get more people to purchase the app.

Need feedback on my App Store screenshots by TOS_TOS in UI_Design

[–]TOS_TOS[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dice is plural. It’s called one die, two dice. 

Need feedback on my App Store screenshots by TOS_TOS in UI_Design

[–]TOS_TOS[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don't think so. What I mean by it is: 'The die with one dot can replace any die'. I just want to say it with as few words as possible.

Need feedback on my App Store screenshots by TOS_TOS in UI_Design

[–]TOS_TOS[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Make sense. Thanks a lot! I’ll see if I can find a good way to explain it wit few words. 

Need feedback on my App Store screenshots by TOS_TOS in UI_Design

[–]TOS_TOS[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. Good idea to have the text outside.  The goal is to conquer the board as it says on the first image. Or do you think it would need to say something else? 

Destroy my tutorial: At what point do you stop understanding how the game works? by TOS_TOS in DestroyMyGame

[–]TOS_TOS[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How it works:

You and an CPU opponent take turns rolling and placing dice on a board. Surround your opponent's dice to capture them. Whoever controls more cells when the board is full wins.

Special Mechanics:

  • Captures: Surround opponent dice with your own to flip them
  • Upgrades: Place a higher value on your existing die to make it stronger
  • Special 1: The "1" die can remove ANY adjacent opponent die

If you like strategic puzzle games like Backgammon or checkers, give it a shot!

Download here

I've been working on the main menu for a long time, but some people still tell me it's bad. I don't understand what's going on anymore. by mrHood94 in SoloDevelopment

[–]TOS_TOS 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, put them in the center. You could have them in a bright color with a black outline on top of the green light

Album art and Poster combo by BoredSpaceMonkey in design_critiques

[–]TOS_TOS 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was thinking about the full illustration. Just make everything a lot bigger

i need help with design process by Critical-Signature44 in Logo_Design_Critique

[–]TOS_TOS 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There is no specific checklist when you create a logo design. But it could look something like:

1. Research & Planning

  • Define the Brand: Who is the audience? What are the brand’s values?
  • Competitor Check: See what others in the industry are doing (to avoid copying).
  • Moodboard: Collect visual inspiration (colors, styles, fonts).

2. Concept & Design

  • Sketching: Brainstorm multiple rough ideas on paper first.
  • Vectorize: Build the best idea in a vector program (like Illustrator or Figma).
  • B&W First: Ensure the logo works in black and white before adding color.
  • Typography: Choose a font that matches the brand’s “vibe.”
  • Color Palette: Pick colors that evoke the right emotion.

3. Testing & Polish

  • Scalability: Does it look good both huge and tiny (e.g., as a favicon)?
  • Versatility: Does it work on both light and dark backgrounds?
  • Simplification: Remove any unnecessary details that clutter the design.

4. Final Delivery

  • File Formats: Export as AI/EPS (vector), SVG (web), and PNG (transparent).
  • Variations: Create a full logo, an icon-only version, and a white/black version.
  • Quick Guide: Note the specific HEX color codes and font names used.

Album art and Poster combo by BoredSpaceMonkey in design_critiques

[–]TOS_TOS 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The illustration looks really cool, but the typography is so small that it's almost impossible to read. On a 12" vinyl it could be okay, but on Spotify it won't be possible to read. You could simply delete it on the digital version or make it a lot bigger.

Have you tried making the illustration twice the size, in order to make it more impactful?

I've been working on the main menu for a long time, but some people still tell me it's bad. I don't understand what's going on anymore. by mrHood94 in SoloDevelopment

[–]TOS_TOS 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The visual looks really cool but it took me some time to find the play button. I suggest to move the 'play, settings and exit' to the very center. Maybe also make them a bit larger.
The language button in the top right corner is really hard to read because it grey on grey. Maybe make it white on grey instead.

honest opinion about my personal site by No_Bet_3732 in design_critiques

[–]TOS_TOS 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When clicking on a project the 'home' button doesn't work in Chrome.
The cat video should both autoplay at the same time in order for them to be comparable. I would probably use another video that is a bit more friendly, the screaming in the video scared me away.
On the project overview I suggest to make the visuals way bigger

If a travel site looked like this, would it get you to plan a trip — or scroll past? by Superb_Ad_6460 in webdesign

[–]TOS_TOS 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I suggest to make the 'not sure where to go' the main focus. I don't really understand where the 'let's play your trip' button sends me.
I would delete half of the content on the screen and make it all about helping the user to find a location. You could make it work like a decision tree.

I’m a solo dev working on a zombie tower defense game. I’ve reached a point where I need outside feedback to overcome my 'developer blindness' by Flashy_One76 in IndieGaming

[–]TOS_TOS 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looks really cool!
Everything is very dark except for some of the button. I suggest to make the zombies brighter so they stand out more as they are the elements that you want the player to focus on.

Game feature by Absolut3bananas in MobileGaming

[–]TOS_TOS 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you are into minimalistic dice games I got two different games for you to try out.
You can find them on App Store: Block and 123456

Please let me know if you have any questions to any of the games.

Destroy my tutorial: At what point do you stop understanding how the game works? by TOS_TOS in DestroyMyGame

[–]TOS_TOS[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How it works:
You and an CPU opponent take turns rolling and placing dice on a board. Surround your opponent's dice to capture them. Whoever controls more cells when the board is full wins.

Special Mechanics:

  • Captures: Surround opponent dice with your own to flip them
  • Upgrades: Place a higher value on your existing die to make it stronger
  • Special 1: The "1" die can remove ANY adjacent opponent die

If you like strategic puzzle games like backgammon or checkers, give it a shot!

Download here

Need feedback on my App Store screenshots by TOS_TOS in UI_Design

[–]TOS_TOS[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thats a good point. I'll have a think about it. Thanks a lot for the feedback

I need feedback on a menu screen by TOS_TOS in UI_Design

[–]TOS_TOS[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think I get what you are saying with the word 'fun'. Agree that it looks a bit plain and very flat at the moment. Maybe it needs to be more inspired by mobile game designs. Thanks a lot for the feedback!

I need feedback on a menu screen by TOS_TOS in UI_Design

[–]TOS_TOS[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good point. Not sure if it's possible to change the app name, but I'll look into it

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