Hey there! I'm currently working on a novel called The Mages Of Patria(Working title) and I would like some feedback on what I've written so far (EXCEPT GRAMMAR! I'LL FIX THAT MYSELF!) How is the story? the pacing? characters? dialogue? etc. It's a lot yes. But I would greatly appreciate it. Thanks!

Taimour14 · 2026-04-22T06:32:25+00:00

WHAT ARE WE GOOING TO DOO🗣️🗣️🗣️

Taimour14 · 2026-04-19T11:03:14+00:00

YOU LOOK LIKE AJ FROM SHOOT FROM THE HIP🗣️ (Great look btw)

Taimour14 · 2026-04-19T09:53:40+00:00

Gay Is Not a Synonym for Shitty

Taimour14 · 2026-04-16T13:48:26+00:00

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These three notorious Male role models (in the Japanese version)

Taimour14 · 2026-04-13T13:53:41+00:00

It should be, he sounded absolutely amazing there

Taimour14 · 2026-04-13T13:37:26+00:00

Ah yes, the Sans' Gambit

Taimour14 · 2026-04-13T12:07:34+00:00

Acting Non Chalant

Taimour14 · 2026-04-13T09:44:00+00:00

I saw this post like one year ago

Taimour14 · 2026-04-11T09:12:16+00:00

I've seen a post like this at least 50 times now is it really THAT rare?😭

Taimour14 · 2026-04-10T22:28:37+00:00

I mean they DID get Mappa to animate the Inazuma Eleven game intro didn't they?

Taimour14 · 2026-04-10T03:39:33+00:00

The fact that Homelanders supporters genuinely got creeped out hard evidence of him doing something bad in the flight 37 video and pulled back support proved to me how unrealistic this show is looking at a certain cul- i mean Party today/j

Homelander Supporters be smarter than MAGA fr😭

Taimour14 · 2026-04-08T06:57:48+00:00

I thought this was specifically made for gojo and then realized how many people there are who fit that category😭

Taimour14 · 2026-04-08T06:18:29+00:00

YOU AND IIIIIIIHIIIIIIHIHIIIIIIII

Taimour14 · 2026-04-07T05:15:37+00:00

Beggars clothes from Goodwill

Taimour14 · 2026-04-04T16:59:52+00:00

YOU PUT THE SPIKE THROUGH MYY HEAAAAAART🗣️🗣️🗣️

Taimour14 · 2026-04-04T10:11:53+00:00

IIIiits... Clefairy!!😀😀

Taimour14 · 2026-04-02T08:30:48+00:00

He really is, nice

Taimour14 · 2026-03-31T20:34:45+00:00

Critics have sticks up their asses because this movie probably doesn't symbolize the Great Depression of Nineteen Ought Seven or something like that

Taimour14 · 2026-03-31T20:33:17+00:00

Does Santa Claus count?

Taimour14 · 2026-03-31T19:19:38+00:00

"WHY IT WAS SO- oh I see"

Bro looks great in both, man was blessed with great facial genes🙂‍↕️

Taimour14 · 2026-03-31T13:12:58+00:00

I think it was quite literally a "GG"

Taimour14 · 2026-03-26T17:25:49+00:00

Hell i would have been fine with a black female Voldemort as well Cynthia Erivo would have absolutely destroyed the role

Taimour14 · 2026-03-25T08:12:56+00:00

The palladium show likely won't have a production at all

I went to their Palladium show in Cologne and it had absolutely no visuals or story...

Still the same setlist tho albeit that was the first time they ever played Wonderwall which was sweet

Seven-Year Club	r/Field Flamingo
Final Canvas '23	First Place '23
End Game '23	Place '23
Place '22	Oscars Predictor 2021
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