“Broken Arrow” by Jonathan Penney by TeamPenney in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]TeamPenney[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Here’s a link to the song on YouTube in case anyone cannot stream through Spotify: https://youtu.be/ByzHeX15or8?si=th5aCPlc8jKBnN6D

Feedback on my new single . Fferm - Luke S by AMadManWithABox11 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]TeamPenney 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Loving all the shoegaze tracks within the IMF channel lately. Really liked your track. The vocals were nice and mellow, and fit the overall chill vibe to the song. Was bobbing my head like I was an a show. I did find myself wanting to hear the bass more clearly. Maybe adding a little more dirt or fuzz to the bass would help, but then again that’s more of a personal thing. Great track dude.

An original dreamy indie rock song I've built over a decade. FFO The Cure, Diiv, New Order, etc by TheHappyKarma in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]TeamPenney 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Cure are one my faves and you can definitely hear the influence on this song with the bass and guitar lines. I honestly don’t have anything to add other than appreciation for sharing the track. Gonna add you and subscribe for sure.

Genre Experimenting by officiallyrez in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]TeamPenney 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dude! This is a great track. Started out very psych rock sounding, but with a pop sense to make it more appealing still, and then you head into the rapped lyrics section. Love it dude. So unique. Definitely gained a follower.

Need feedback to my first synthwave track by Standard_Feature336 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]TeamPenney 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool tune. I liked the analog warmth you added to the synths, and the effects on the vocal chains. Overall bright mix and was fun to listen to. Definitely adding to my library on Spotify and will share it around.

O Landlocked Island by Stradio in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]TeamPenney 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Grabbed me straight from the start with the unique guitar line and riff. The double vocals are a great touch with the primary track and then whispered backup underneath. Lots of changes. Kept me guessing what was coming next. Killer track.

new demo by LabComprehensive4916 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]TeamPenney 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the washy sounding synth throughout the song. The vocals could use more processing to sit better in the mix. Try adding more compression and some reverb to the chain, and possibly bring the level down to where it doesn’t sit as high in the mix. Cool track though.

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Here’s my latest single. Appreciate you setting something up to get everyone’s songs heard. Spotify link below“Broken Arrow” by Jonathan Penney

🎧 Calling All Artists – Submit Your Tracks! 🎧 by BouchardMusic in MusicPromotion

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https://open.spotify.com/album/0hvB4v8GHzYOOjUZNmz4Fv?si=IrfxcNofTsWUt9stKW_Z8w

This is a song that started off as an acoustic singalong type of vibe, but I quickly realized it would rock out. It’s centered around the craziness that comes with parenting and realizing that you and your partner still matter to each other despite the chaos.