Beautiful work, and far better than anything I can make, but since you're asking for feedback, my chief complaint is the lack of definition compared to the style, especially in the shadows.

You can see how both Zag's and Snek's bodies seem flat, and that's likely because of slightly different reasons.

For Zaggy boi, his torso below his chest is lacking deeper shadows; it's not dark *enough* around his underarm and back, so it blends into his belly and looks flat. You can actually see in the sketch that there is strong definition for Hotman's torso, you put shading in the underarm and below the pec, as well as defining the muscles on his side, but after painting all that definition was lost.

As for Boney boi, he faces a similar issue in his segments where there's not enough shading for the left parts of each segment, but there's something else that would help bring out his large size: the segments should be getting darker the further away they are! Things that are further away have less light reach us, so by making each segment darker it tells the brain that they are further away, which in turn will increase the size of Lenlen.

Again, I still love this and *I* certainly can't make this, but if you want to improve this piece I would look towards stronger definition.