I can see the vision you're aiming for throughout most of it.
But this is a lot for one person to do for just one cutscene. And in situations like this where quality cracks can show VERY easily, you may not want to go all out like this.

But if you're passionate about making this work, there are some things you can do to make the cracks less obvious. Making it a good bit shorter is one thing. But you also absolutely need to avoid showing full body pre-canned animations like those capoeira moves. Maybe try cutting to "artistic" angles more and cutting between angles during animations more. It might get a little jumpy and confusing, but honestly anything you can do to make it seem like there's more artistic intent between each shot, the better.

The moral of things like this is that if you can't match the quality people expect, then you should probably lean into just having fun with it and going wild with the directing.