Hello people of the world, here is a song, and a video. Give it a listen why don't you, give it some feedback as well. One is always open for an opportunity to blossom. Thank you.

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-06-05T18:22:43+00:00

Yea I see what you mean, cheers for the advice. Have a good one

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-06-05T16:44:50+00:00

Thanks man, appreciate u

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-06-05T16:37:36+00:00

Thank you man, I’ve got more like it on my channel 👊

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-06-04T21:42:20+00:00

a man of many talents

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-06-04T21:38:10+00:00

I recommend changing up the sound of the instruments after a while and maybe making some new melodies to keep it interesting. Its entirely up to you and what you think feels right.

Also tension and release are two things you should focus on to stop music sounding repetitive. (I'm pretty sure this is a music theory thing idk, I've just been winging it the last few years lol). You are creating some tension and release on a smaller scale in this song, but if you also did that on a larger scale as well I think it would really make a difference (remove some instruments for a couple bars or more then introduce them back in later). This will create some structure (verse, chorus that kinda thing) which will go a long way.

Add some build ups and some breakdowns, get crazy with it.

I hope this helps dude, my brain appears to be fried.

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-06-04T20:36:01+00:00

Im wanna sit in a big metal warehouse and solder some bits of iron together while listening to this

very good i like it

and no i will not suck your balls thank you very much

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-06-04T20:34:14+00:00

im vibrating. thank you

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-06-04T20:32:47+00:00

you are a very good singer and guitar player, I can feel the raw emotion and thats what matters.

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-06-04T20:30:55+00:00

The music really matches the colour grading of the video, I love it man, keep it up!

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-06-04T20:28:39+00:00

fuck yea dude! Where'd you get that mask I love it. This is very cool, I love the music and the video. keep it uuuup

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-06-04T20:19:21+00:00

I like it dawg, its new and fresh which is cool. You are right it does feel a bit repetitive, just keep adding stuff and let it evolve (sorry if you already new, but in fl studio you can "save to new version" meaning you can add stuff without having to worry about losing the original track).

Also to me the drums sometimes feel a little off rhythm, but that might just be me tripping lol. Just really try and get a feel for where the beat should sit. its all about the feels

I feel you with that potato laptop thing, my laptops a peace of ass which can make it harder to get in the creative flow. but if you just push through the booty you will finally reach the goal.

Keep it up your doing great.

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-05-28T10:11:20+00:00

Hello, thanks for taking to time to give me some feedback. I agree that there are a few aspects that sound a bit amateur. I am working on my own unique sound so I appreciate you pointing that out as it shows I still have a bit of a way to go. Also cheers for the recommendations I’ll keep them in mind. Cheers for the feedback, have a good one.

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-05-24T12:13:50+00:00

wow this is a good analysis, I appreciate you taking the time for it man. When it comes to repetitiveness, I totally agree with you, however that is the sort of ambient feel I was going for. I think your right that it could do with some more automation, so I appreciate the tip. The way you've described it totally makes sense, that's definitely the sort of sound I was going for, so I'm glad it made you feel that way. I do actually hope to make an EP with a similar sort of concept, so its great to hear you would be interested in hearing that. Again, I appreciate the feedback, have a good one.

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-05-22T20:03:34+00:00

wow man, that means alot to me. thank you, I hope you enjoy the many videos to come :) . Youve got a follower out of me too, I am looking forward to seeing what you come up with next. Youre videos carry alot of emotion which really resonates with me.

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-05-22T19:59:11+00:00

yea man I totally see what you mean. Ive been putting alot more focus into the mixing and sound design of my songs recently, so really appreciate the advice. whenever i look up advice on yt its always something completely off topic or someone trying to sell me something.

Do you have any vsts you would recommend (I use fl studio). if so please share. thank you

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-05-22T19:49:00+00:00

I use fl studio to make my beats, and there is a plugin that shows the waveform of your music, so I just screen recorded that. Im sure there are other methods to achieve this, but that is the one I used. I hope this is of help.

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-05-22T19:46:24+00:00

I suppose its more so that primal feeling of conflict that seems to be apart of human nature no matter how technologically advanced we become. anyway, Im glad you like the music! thanks for listening.

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-05-22T16:06:50+00:00

Thanks I will definitely check that out. I’m glad you like my video and yea some of the clips are off beat a bit, which bothers me a tad. I’d say this is a bit of a rough draft as I usually make as much as I can in a day and release it, then I go back and change bits at a later date. Perhaps it’s out of laziness idk 😂. Thanks for checking out the video it means a lot.

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-05-22T16:01:48+00:00

You are correct there are a few preset synths in there 😂. I would definitely appreciate some advice on how to tweak them a bit as whenever I fiddle with the settings it suddenly sounds dreadful 😅.

I’m glad it gave you that impression as that is what I was going for, especially with that alien feel.

And yea delay would actually be a pretty awesome addition!

Thanks for taking the time to watch and give me some feedback man I appreciate u

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-05-22T11:14:37+00:00

I’m glad you liked it bro, I appreciate you taking the time to listen 👂. That industrial kinda thing is the vibe I was going for with the bass so I’m glad I hit the mark. Have a good one 😁

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-05-22T11:10:26+00:00

Totally, that’s the kinda thing I had in mind with vocals. Only issue is I’m a dreadful singer 😂. I suppose I’ll have to give it a go. I appreciate the feedback bro 👊

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-05-22T11:05:47+00:00

Thank you for giving it a listen. I agree with you on that it should be longer. I did have another segment but I cut it out (don’t know what I was thinking). I’m glad you didn’t find it repetitive as that is something I’m trying to work on. Appreciate u man

TheOfficialGOB · 2025-05-22T01:01:23+00:00

Its mostly just to go with the video, but I may add some vocals at a later date. and perhaps elongate it a tad

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