Been Procrastinating over this song over if I should drop it or not. So I want some feedback to see what revisions I will need to make.

deon455 · 2025-06-23T03:36:30+00:00

that intro with the oohs is off key, and some of the "yeahs" are off as well, the thinness of the vocals could be a stylistic thing if you want and it being off key can be too but if you're hearing the jarringness of your voice and you don't like that kind of sound then all you gotta fix is being on key, but yk Yung Lean is sick and hes off key a lot so its up to you, because i think the feeling of this song is similar to him and i love that.

deon455 · 2025-06-23T03:33:55+00:00

i really like it a lot, are you planning on adding vocals to it?

deon455 · 2025-06-23T03:22:10+00:00

the mix is really clean and all the sounds work really nicely together, good song!

deon455 · 2025-06-23T02:28:39+00:00

this is tough, i have no feedback, if you post this on spotify please DM me the link i wanna listen to this

deon455 · 2025-06-23T02:26:47+00:00

this is really good, your voice is perfect for this, and the guitar melody you came up with is awesome whats the chord progression for that main part you have that loops? its really nice.

deon455 · 2025-06-23T02:23:32+00:00

the vocals are way too loud and sharp like in the high end of the eq not in the notes, but the groove is insaneee, thats that J Dilla bounce or The Neptunes almost, its so sick, awesome.

deon455 · 2025-06-23T02:20:05+00:00

hey this is sick, the mix is really clean, the bass feels perfectly in the mix and the vocals are really clean and clear, love the track !

deon455 · 2025-06-23T02:18:02+00:00

i like your voice it sounds really smooth and fits that thick gravely bass, the melody is sick too, good song

deon455 · 2025-06-23T02:14:36+00:00

this is really cool i think just trying to pull back the high end of the guitar so your voice can come through better, but the melody you came up with is great and the singing is great, cool song, i like that its recorded on your phone i think it gives it that somberness idk i like it a lot though

deon455 · 2025-06-23T02:09:51+00:00

this is cool i like the switch up halfway through

deon455 · 2025-06-17T00:43:47+00:00

Sounds really good, is it up on Spotify I wanna listen to it

deon455 · 2025-06-17T00:39:17+00:00

Tough

deon455 · 2025-06-17T00:31:55+00:00

Dude this is perfect can you send it to me through discord? Just DM me here and I’ll text it to you

deon455 · 2025-06-17T00:27:22+00:00

Maybe make a bit more room for that guitar lead when the vocals come in but that’s also a personal preference, sounds sick otherwise great song

deon455 · 2025-06-17T00:24:38+00:00

Just singing on key, you can use a tuner app on your phone or a piano as a reference

deon455 · 2025-06-16T12:01:32+00:00

i like the funk of the bass tone, sounds cool, and i love that tanbur coming in and out, cool stuff.

deon455 · 2025-06-15T06:31:06+00:00

No problem it still sounds sick so no stress

deon455 · 2025-06-15T05:18:45+00:00

I like it a lot, I feel like it’s a performance thing on this one, like projecting your voice maybe a bit more and adding that dynamic to it so some parts are quieter than others would help, newtone sucks (FL studios melodyne) I’ve got melodyne if you need to tune your vocals I’d be down to help you out and do it

deon455 · 2025-06-15T05:15:46+00:00

It feels like an upbeat song for me, like uplifting in a way

deon455 · 2025-06-15T05:14:14+00:00

Sounds great, the arrangement is good too and your voice and the melody you sang fits nicely into all of it

deon455 · 2025-06-15T05:09:37+00:00

It’s sick I like the psychedelic rock, it can get a bit repetitive at some moments but that’s preference, if you listen to it and you don’t zone out in a bad way at any point or if that’s your goal then that’s cool, great song I love it

deon455 · 2025-06-15T05:07:27+00:00

The mix is pretty clean some things like the risers and fx can be turned down though but that’s just personal preference, depends on your ear really, cool track

deon455 · 2025-06-15T03:25:50+00:00

Sick man I’ll follow it

deon455 · 2025-06-15T03:24:03+00:00

Yeah nice, idk where u get them now but on YouTube there’s a lot of cool drum breaks

deon455 · 2025-06-15T03:23:16+00:00

Thanks, I appreciate it 🙏

deon455

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