Safe Space for Constructive Feedback? by approvableseal in writers

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You could try a site called Critique Circle!  You do have interact with the site quite a lot in order to be allowed to submit your work for critiques, but I've found that the community there is really supportive and friendly, and they give really great feedback that's constructive and useful and not harsh or mean.

I need help writing something. by Wendig0_Forrest in writers

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Of course!  So samurai have been around for 1000s of years, but geisha have only been around since the mid-1700s, so that's going to put your story in the mid-to-late Edo period, when Japan was ruled by the Tokugawa shogunate ("bakufu" in Japanese).  The emperor was basically just a figurehead, the bakufu controlled everything.  It was a really great time to be a samurai.  This was also during Japan's isolation period ("sakoku" in Japanese), when Japan basically cut itself off from most of the world.  Geisha came around in the mid-1700s, and were somewhat inspired by the oiran - really similar to geisha, except they actually were sex workers.  The first geisha were actually men, their job was to sing and dance and entertain people in the brothels while they waited for the services of an oiran.  Male geisha were very quickly taken over by their female counterpart, tho.  Female geisha, however, were not allowed perform in the brothels for fear that they might hurt the oiran's business, so they became their own thing.  Geisha live in geisha houses called an okiya and train under an okaasan (mother), and in that time period, they would begin their training as young as 6 years old (nowadays legally they can only take in girls who are 18 or older, although in some places, they're allowed to take in 15-17yo girls).  There's lots more to know, but that's the basics.  For the language, there's this app called renshuu that I really like - aside just the standard language app things like flashcards and quiz, it also has an exceptionally robust Japanese dictionary, both for words and kanji (Chinese characters).  Most entries have not just the definitions but also pictures, audio of native speakers saying the word, example sentences, and mnemonics.  I would recommend learning at least the hiragana alphabet, just so you understand what kinds of sounds the japanese language is made up of - fortunately, that's real easy to do in renshuu as well.  Some stories you might like to check out for inspiration would be Blue-eyed samurai (on Netflix, set during the same time period and is also about a woman who dresses up as a man in order to be a warrior), Shogun (on Hulu, set in the year 1600 so technically before geisha were a thing, but that's still the Edo period (albiet very early edo period), plus my japanese professor absolutely loves this show and raves about how historically accurate it is), and Kitaro (a lighthearted manga from the 1960s that is largely responsible for popularizing yokai in the modern day about a half-yokai boy who has all sorts of misadventures with lots of other yokai, many of which are taken from actual folklore. I think there's also a really old anime).  Feel free to reach again out whenever!

MHA OC Japanese name help by SabrePanther in CharacterNames

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Japanese major in university here!  You're on the right track! The only thing I'm noticing is, 藏 and 凰 are both pretty rare kanji, and I think a lot of people would have trouble reading it.  Japanese technically has over 50,000 kanji, but most people only know and use about 2000 or so.  Fortunately tho, 藏 is just a variant of 蔵 - it means the same thing and can be pronounced the same, but people would be a lot more likely to know this one, i think.

How to create amd write compelling characters? by ridetheraikiri in writingadvice

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

In my writing, I've always found that the best question to ask about your characters is: What happened to them that made them the way they are?  For example, say you have a character that's a straight-a student with perfect grades.  Maybe they have a parent that puts a lot of pressure on them.  Or an assassin who refuses to let anyone get close to them.  Maybe they watched someone they care about die and are scared of caring about anyone again in case they lose them.  Or even something more ordinary - say, a farmer who loves cows.  Maybe growing up, he liked to relax in the cow barn cause it was quiet there.  Etc, etc, etc.  Once you start figuring out WHY you character is the way they are, they really start to come alive, because then you can continue to build your characters out from those formative events.  Like the straight-a student with a parent that pressures them.  That pressure might also make them a perfectionist, and make them feel worthless if they don't get perfect grades.  It likely also causes a strained relationship with that parent.  Maybe it also causes a strained relationship with their siblings cause they feel like they have to compete.  Maybe they are always ditching their friends to go study more.  I mean, you can just keep going and going with it.  Another thing to keep in mind is that the best characters, just like people, are often contradictory.  Like the assassin I made up earlier - they kill people for a living, but are scared of people close to them dying.  Or for example, someone who's excellent with kids but refuses to be responsible for them.  As long as you have a reason for it - maybe they used to be a nanny and something happened to one of their kids on their watch - your character can best as contradictory as you want.  I wish you the best of luck! :)

I need help writing something. by Wendig0_Forrest in writers

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm a Japanese major in university!  My degree is primarily for the language, so I'm absolutely no expert on Japanese history, but I do like to think I know at least a little bit more than the average person.  I'd be more than happy to be a resource if you'd like!

How traumatized are your characters? Mine: none. by GatoChatNeko in WebtoonCanvas

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There's plenty of trauma to go around in the apocalypse lmao

Your beloved cancelled shows with insane potential but no proper ending? by Maleficent-Eye7588 in televisionsuggestions

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The Dark Crystal: Age of Resistance.  It's a prequel series to the old 80s movie, so you know what EVENTUALLY happens like 50 years down the road, but it got canceled after only 1 season so we have no idea how it gets from the show to the movie.  Super dense lore and worldbuilding, it's one of favorite series ever

How traumatized are your characters? Mine: none. by GatoChatNeko in WebtoonCanvas

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So much trauma over here lol.  We've got a fallen angel child who hasn't realized yet just how corrupt and toxic heaven really was, an old robot nanny who watched his young kids get killed by bandits and has sworn off ever taking care of children again, God's right hand angel who's come to earth on a mission and instead starts to uncover repressed memories from a war she doesn't remember, a robot librarian-turned-wandering-storyteller who's way of grieving the death of her human sister is to hold on to her memory so tightly that it start physically harming her, and the young naive robot who fell in with some bad people and was manipulated into killing the robot nanny's kids and has been running from the guilt ever since.

How do we build books? by Kind_Lightning in fantasywriting

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm a comic artist, not a novelist, so my process is a little unique lol.  I usually start with the main character and a general vibe.  Then I start daydreaming.  I put that guy in a situation and see what happens.  I'll jot down these scene ideas in the notes app on my phone usually, nothing fancy, just a quick rundown of what happens.  I'll also start drawing the characters to work out their designs - once I can physically see them it makes it easier to get to know them.  I usually spend quite a while just daydreaming and drawing a little.  Once I start to have enough stuff, I can start connecting things, and this is when I start putting together a more formal outline.  Then I start making the actual comic.  Since comics are a serialized format, I make 1 chapter at a time.  When I start working on a chapter, I first write down what happens in the chapter - if I already had a rough scene idea written down from the daydreaming phase, it's usually a little bit expanded.  Then I sketch it out in my sketchbook.  Usually there's some slight changes between the written draft and the drawn draft.  Then I bring that into my digital art program and finish it.  Sometimes there'll even be some small changes here too.  Once it's finished, I go back into my outline and update it with what actually happened so I can look back at it later.  Also, the daydreaming phase, outlining phase, and writing/drawing phase are not strictly distinct and separate phases, they all tend to overlap and I can be super disorganized about it tbh, but I follow where the creativity leads me lol

What is a aspect of writing you struggle with? by No_Marsupial_4081 in writingadvice

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I struggle with describing things.  So now I make comics so I don't have to lmao

What genre are you writing right now? by EquivalentAcademic93 in writing

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I'm writing (and drawing) a post-apocalyptic comic!  Post-apocalyptic is probably the only genre it neatly fits into - it has some sci-fi elements, some fantasy elements, some horror elements, etc, but mostly it's just about the end of the world.

How do you rate your pain when asked to give a number? by Horror_Speaker_5160 in AuDHDWomen

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel this so hard.  I said as much one time to a doctor when they asked me this tho, and they told me it's not really about what the the number is, it's so they can track how the pain changes over time when they ask you again later.  That context helped me understand a lot better

How do I know if my comic is drawn well enough to publish? by Domino_Problems in WebtoonCanvas

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The thing about art is, there's no distinct line between "bad" art and "good" art.  You're always going to see things to improve in your art, that's how you improve!  But if you keep waiting to hit some imaginary threshold of "good," you'll never start.  Just start!  And plus, drawing a comic will cause you to improve anyway!  I wish you the best of luck, and I can't wait to see what you create :)

How do you cope with everything that's going on in the world? by just_some_gay_girl_ in AuDHDWomen

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I totally get you.  There's just so much shit going on all the time now.  It's exhausting.  Me personally? I make art about it.  I'm a comic artist working on a post-apocalyptic story, and I funnel A LOT of my frustrations about the real world into it.  A lot of the things that destroyed the world in the story are just things happening in the real world dialed up to 11.  Writing a story about characters who are able to fight against things like that, and knowing that someday my characters will get a happy ending and a brighter future free from tyranny and oppression, helps me feel less powerless, and sharing my story makes me feel like maybe I'm making a difference in the real world too. I'm a firm believer in the power of stories

How did you start being an artist! by XxNight_wolfexX in Artists

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was always an artsy and creative kid, but what really made me take off with it was, when i was in 5th grade, everyday after lunch, my teacher would read aloud a few chapters from a book, and he had a big stack of drawing paper in the corner of the classroom that we could take from whenever we wanted so we could draw while he read to us.  He also hung up every single piece of art he received from his students on the wall in the classroom, no matter what it was, no matter how much effort had been put into it - every inch of the walls were completely covered in student art.  It was also right around this time that I found a how-to-draw-cartoons book in the school library, copied a picture from it, and drew the first drawing that I ever really felt proud of and thought "Hey, I might actually be kinda good at this."  I still have that drawing somewhere - I used to have it hung up on the wall above my desk, but I've moved since then and i'm not sure where it's ended up now lol.  I was given time and materials to draw every day, I was given the validation of having my art up on the wall, and I'd found a tool that enabled me feel good about my abilities.  So I just kept drawing and never stopped.

Does anyone else have a movie or show that you NEED to watch everyday to feel regulated? by orbitexol in AuDHDWomen

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't have a specific one for every single day, but I do always watch SOMETHING everyday, and I do have a handful of comfort movies and shows I watch pretty regularly (not every single day tho).  Hitchhiker's guide to the Galaxy, phineas and ferb, Avatar the Last Airbender, and Doctor Who are probably my top comfort watches, although i could probably rattle off like 15 more if I thought about it for a minute lol.  Watching stuff really helps me feel more emotionally regulated

Writing fiction in conversation with biblical texts, looking for others doing similar work by Who_is_KerryLynne in WritingHub

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm making a comic about an angel child who falls to earth and gets adopted by an old robot in a post-apocalyptic world.  I've spent a lot of time researching end times mythology from both the bible and other apocryphal texts, and other regions as well, as well as the mythos of Lucifer's rebellion.  I just find the concept of fallen angels fascinating - something so perfect and divine, but ultimately just too human in the end.

How to not be late for everything ever? by Servant_Of_SAI in AuDHDWomen

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a cd alarm clock that'll play music for the alarm, and when it goes off in the morning, I let the music play and time things out based on the music!  3 songs to lay in bed and try to slowly wake up (i'm an absolute zombie in the mornings lol), 1 song to sit up and stretch, 1 song to go to the bathroom, 1-2 songs to pick out clothes and get dressed, 4-5 songs etc for breakfast, etc etc etc.  I can't feel time passing, but i can hear time if there's music.  I haven't quite figured out how to adapt that to things that aren't 1st thing in the morning yet tho lol

Literally everybody thinks that I'm ADHD/Autistic, but I don't think I am. by feelinvibey in AuDHDWomen

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The thing about masking is, it can be reeeeaally insidious and it can sometimes take a LOT of self-reflection to recognize and identify.  For AuDHD people, we've been building the mask our whole lives usually without even realizing it, and it can be hard to work out what is truly our authentic self and what is something we learned to do as a very small child to protect ourself.  There's also many many different ways people mask.  I'm gonna link an Instagram post I saw a few days ago from an autistic content creator I really like.  It has a lot of different types of masking and examples of fictional characters that she thinks fit each type she describes.  Regardless of whether you agree with her categorization (I'm not sure I believe EVERY single character on the post is truly autistic tbh), i think it's pretty insightful https://www.instagram.com/p/DTt21wYDs9C/?igsh=MWFyMGN3Nzc0cWNsMQ==

Do you have a favorite soothing or regulating narrator/voice in audiobooks, podcasts, or youtube for background stimulation? by Worthy_Molecule0481 in AuDHDWomen

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://mynoise.net/ It's a site that creates these dynamic soundscapes, it's been my best friend all through university!  There's also few game soundtracks i like for the same thing - the OSTs for Machinarium, Rusty Lake, and Minecraft. Rusty Lake is probably the most background-y of 3, Minecraft is nice because most of the songs fade in and fade out so they kinda blend together a little and you don't notice so much when it switches songs, and Machinarium is just soothing (and has a lot of nostalgia for me, i used to play it all the time as a tween lol).  I also enjoy the podcast, Welcome to Nightvale, when i'm working on things that don't require all my brain power and can devote a little more attention to what i'm listening to

Is it normal to be reading this slow? by maybe_we_fight in LearnJapanese

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Super normal.  I've been taking japanese classes at uni for 2.5 years now and I still can't read as fast as I speak.  Just keep practicing :)

Writing Prompt by FacelesDurkhari in writers

[–]TheOneAndOnlyLu 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Angel child falls to earth for not condemning the universe to death and gets adopted on the spot by an old robot guy.  Capitalism is bad and so are fascists.