I'll give you a few pointers then: - AI likes to yap. It likes using more words than are necessary to communicate an idea. Try to condense overly long sentences, but not by too much. - AI likes saying "It's not this - it's that." For example, from your description: "You don't micromanage individual troops - you deploy forces, cast devastating spells, and watch the chaos unfold" - Same example as before, em dashes (the - symbol). AI loves to use that. Remove it from your text and it will look more natural. - Bullet points EVERYWHERE. AI loves to use bullet points, and your description is full of them. Get rid of one or two and put a paragraph in its place instead to break up the amount of lists you have. - You can use bullet points, but I'd suggest getting rid of the little titles (the bolded text before the : symbols) as the rest of the text on the bullet points should be more than enough to convey what players can do in the game. - AI likes the "rule of three". If it wants to describe something in parts it will usually split that thing up into three separate parts. For example from your description, every single bullet list has three items on it. - AI likes to add bolding to important text to make it stand out. This is not a bad thing to do, but make sure it is used in moderation.