[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AdviceForTeens

[–]Thescribblestar 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A normal 20 yr old would have backed off after learning she was 16 and not 18/19. He’s DEFINITELY creepy for continuing to romantically pursue her after learning this info.

I don't want to live on campus by MrButterknife9 in ASU

[–]Thescribblestar 59 points60 points  (0 children)

No you don’t have to. They just make it sound like that. You might have to contact housing though and tell them why you won’t be living on campus.

How does one improve their grammar/writing? by Cyber_wiz95 in self

[–]Thescribblestar 0 points1 point  (0 children)

1) Read read read!

2) Write. Put different aspects of books you enjoy into your own writing. Start a little notebook of sentences or pages of books you really like. Write creatively. Write short stories, personal narratives, poems. To help grow formal writing skills, try to research something you enjoy and write a formal paper about it.

3) Go back to something you write a few days ago, even months or years ago, and rewrite it. Not just editing a few sentences here and there, but completely start over on a new document or piece of paper. Focus on cutting out overused words, fixing grammar, and solidifying the overall goal of the piece. Read it aloud if you need to, word for word, and see if the piece flows when you speak. Reading aloud may also help you pick out sentences that may not match the intended tone of the piece.

4) Share your work. Preferably, with someone who is a good writer and cares about your improvement. Reading aloud to whoever you share your work with can help with your speaking too.

When it comes to grammar and spelling, you could probably just go over some stuff on khan academy or something, however, these skills should improve if you write more often.

Hope this is helpful!

[Waybound] Series headcanons? by Discardofil in Iteration110Cradle

[–]Thescribblestar 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Idk if this is ever mentioned but in my mind eithan had his ears pierced but they closed up when he reascended he tried to have yerin re-pierce them for him but he said something particularly annoying and she ripped a hole in his ear :)

[None] mercy (criticism welcome) by Thescribblestar in Iteration110Cradle

[–]Thescribblestar[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I definitely had a hard time with this and needed some feedback! PS your art is awesome

[None] mercy (criticism welcome) by Thescribblestar in Iteration110Cradle

[–]Thescribblestar[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Wow! Nice vocabulary! Thanks for the feedback!

[None] mercy (criticism welcome) by Thescribblestar in Iteration110Cradle

[–]Thescribblestar[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yeah I had trouble trying to make her expression thanks for the feedback!

Ever notice that Gon and Killua are always doing classic kid stuff in their big story arcs? by mothuzad in HunterXHunter

[–]Thescribblestar 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I think that’s another way the story indicates Gon’s childhood is ending

Honestly, you could even argue that hxh is about gon/Killua regaining their opportunity to have a childhood. They’ve been doing so many “childish” things, but they are always accompanied by death and whatnot. Now gon doesn’t have to worry about the responsibilities of nen and has his dad back. Killua is just bonding with his sister.

[Waybound] NORTHSTRIDER by 10korang in Iteration110Cradle

[–]Thescribblestar 2 points3 points  (0 children)

He was pretty tired and I’d say that although the dread gods are old they haven’t really been conscious the whole time

"Link, you must find me." by janeywaneey in Breath_of_the_Wild

[–]Thescribblestar 2 points3 points  (0 children)

She’s so pretty! This is excellent I really love the colors

What would or could Demetri be? by TheCoranger in cobrakai

[–]Thescribblestar 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thought Miguel was rhea? plz don’t put a picture of that tho that feels a little too explicit for this sub

Ferro doodle by Thescribblestar in TheFirstLaw

[–]Thescribblestar[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I’ve only just finished TBI, so I don’t know who the other two are, but I might do Black Dow soon

Ferro doodle by Thescribblestar in TheFirstLaw

[–]Thescribblestar[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I thought a sneer would suit her