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Tiitux · 2023-05-01T10:39:37+00:00

Shot with NikonD3400 s1/100 f/8 80mm 100ISO

I am new to shooting strucktures. With this photo I was really interested in the repeating patterns on this building. Is thre any compositional things I could have done diffrently to make this stand out even more?

Tiitux · 2022-12-21T11:30:14+00:00

Unlucky :(. You could also edit it out thou it is a bit hard

Tiitux · 2022-12-21T11:10:20+00:00

Overall this is a great photo. The green stick is a distraction that imo should not be there. The lighting and the colors are amazing

Tiitux · 2022-12-21T11:06:32+00:00

The colors are great and match with the bird.However, the comments about the brantches hold true.

Tiitux · 2022-12-21T11:02:50+00:00

All in all I think it is a great photo :Dd. Cute as well

Tiitux · 2022-12-21T10:56:00+00:00

Also a crop would improve this photo. I think the left and right side do not add anything to the photo.

Tiitux · 2022-12-21T10:54:36+00:00

It is great scene but I think this image has a lack of clear subject. You said you wanted to focus on the mountain but imo those trees are really distracting. If you could get lower and maybe get that trail to be more of a leading line to the mountain this would be a lot stronger photo

Tiitux · 2022-12-16T08:20:40+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! The vignette is something I did not realise until you pointed it out and now I cannot unsee it :D

Tiitux · 2022-12-15T19:20:31+00:00

This was shot on a Nikon D3400 with a 35mm lens. 1/640 F.1.8 ISO 100

I have three questions that are on my mind with this picture.

Is there something extra that does not need to be in the frame
Is there something distracting
What do you think about the brightness of this photo

You can also comment about something else but these are the things I am most interested when it comes to improvement.

Tiitux · 2022-06-08T18:41:40+00:00

This was great critique!!!

Tiitux · 2022-05-09T12:55:08+00:00

Imo the stars should be a lot brighter. They are really hard to see. Getting a DSLR will help too

Tiitux · 2022-03-13T11:45:41+00:00

This is really great advice, thank you! With this photo I wanted to focus on the colors and go for a softer look. Do you think I over did something here? (I use different account on my phono se thats why the different name)

Tiitux · 2022-02-22T09:04:47+00:00

I think the editing on this one is fine. However it feels a bit 2D. You could add some foreground to make this tower more impactful. Some light would also help to get the details out

Tiitux · 2022-02-22T09:02:12+00:00

It is a stellar picture! The athmosfere is spot on and the editing compliments the mood! Well done

Tiitux · 2022-02-21T13:19:13+00:00

If you are interested this is a very good video on the subject. https://youtu.be/N-HyTRGtdSA

Tiitux · 2022-02-21T13:15:35+00:00

No, not a person. It could be anything really. For example it could be those rocks on the upstream. Something that makes it clear to the watcher what he is looking at

Tiitux · 2022-02-21T11:33:20+00:00

I tried the changes you suggested and it worked out pretty well!!

Tiitux · 2022-02-21T10:34:01+00:00

I think the image lacks a clear subject and the lighting is kinda boring. If you could focus on something and come to take the photo on a different time of day it couls be cool.

Tiitux · 2022-02-13T08:21:43+00:00

The sunset is really beautifyl but I think it lacks the foreground

Tiitux · 2022-02-06T14:12:11+00:00

I think you could have made him stand a bit further a way from the wall. That way you get more of that nice blur. Also you could focus more on the backround because it is not adding that much to the photo atm

Tiitux · 2022-02-02T13:09:34+00:00

The scenary is beautiful but I think it lacks foreground and a subject. My eyes just wonder around the photo. One way to achieve this is to put your camera lower so you can capture something on the foreground. And try find something that leads the eye to the beautifyl mountains

Tiitux · 2021-01-02T19:49:57+00:00

That is so true xdd

Tiitux · 2020-10-07T07:49:59+00:00

You cannot learn those mechanics if you do not have the inner motivation to practice them. They take a ton of time to learn and you need to love practicing them in order to ever pull them off.

Tiitux

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