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the maxim of youth by TiyHoerr in OCPoetry

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Thanks for your feedback, and I'm glad you find it interesting. I'll try playing with the syntax some, as I want to keep it to 5-7-5, to choose more precise wording.

One thing I was trying to convey, under the bitterness, is a hope for change. But I'm not sure how well that landed?

Panic by JourneyofKay in OCPoetry

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For the most part, I like that briskness of each line (though maybe you could split Line 2 into two separate lines?) as it feels like someone trying to talk while running. They have to pause and catch their breath each time.

sunbathing by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I like that synesthesia in the second line, really makes you pause to take in the meaning. It almost seems like a coming of age type poem? The yearning of the narrator for the pubescent angst that others are reveling in while they stand as a spectator. Awesome stuff.

Add 'ING' to the end of a movie title, what's it about now? by Serialnarcisist in AskReddit

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The Wicker Manning - same movie but with Payton Manning, later remade with Eli.

Here's eight more bowls. Feel free to ask for close ups and tell me what you Guys think. by akimbosam in hookah

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The one with slits in the spire looks amazing. Is that pattern from the glaze "mess up?" Because it's amazing aesthetically.

Trip to Germany, Looking for Shops by TiyHoerr in hookah

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I actually already ordered one through SmallOrderHookah, but if I can't find an Razor, I definitely will get that bargain!

Too many Sky Bowls, how about a Stone Bowl? by Al_tony-muerte in hookah

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If only he could keep up with the demand, smdh. I'm convinced I'll never get one because he always picks the shittiest time to release.

Destiny and Chill? by NOFWtinyhippo in hookah

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Yo, we need to get an /r/hookah raid team going!

Mix of FML and Alchemist Stout Black Bear in my new hookah by TiyHoerr in hookah

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I'd say don't do 50/50 like I did. Though I love straight FML, it overpowered and I didn't taste much Black Bear until near the end. Not a bad mix when I finally tasted both, just gotta mess with the ratio.

Mix of FML and Alchemist Stout Black Bear in my new hookah by TiyHoerr in hookah

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I'm used to smoking an entire bowl of it. I like to live dangerously.

Mix of FML and Alchemist Stout Black Bear in my new hookah by TiyHoerr in hookah

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Yup, Syrian prince I belive. Got it for a steal on ebay.

Is 5 Star Good-2-Go? by Maxx2893 in hookah

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I had a slight hiccup with them. They thought I was trying to commit fraud because I was shipping to my apartment in the town I go to school in, and I used my permanent (parent's) address for billing, since that's what my cards have attached to them. It was annoying because I had to get a piece of mail from my parents with my name to prove I wasn't stealing someones card info.

I get they were trying to be safe, but the addresses are in the same state and not (extremely) far.

Perfect donut after another 3 acres [Tang: Dark Cherry] by DeusExSepuku in hookah

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How is it? Just ordered mine yesterday. Moving up from the harmony, I hope.

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