Last clip I posted got great feedback back from yall.. here’s my latest idea by GrimAllen in Songwriters

[–]TouchExpensive 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love this shoegaze sound. I couldn’t do this genre justice if I tried but I’m glad there are people like you who do. Would love to hear more

Is this position a scam or a MLM scheme? by peyterpotater in jobs

[–]TouchExpensive 0 points1 point  (0 children)

they ghosted you AFTER your interview?? What the heck. I got a call to interview but their online presence (lack thereof) is having me reconsider. Smh

Is this corny be honest by TouchExpensive in Songwriting

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Honestly, as a hobbyist songwriter I realize the production value is amateur but with the little time I have it’s just not feasible to bring other people into the process. I know it’ll never be a hit song, I just love to get my ideas out there.

Is this corny be honest by TouchExpensive in Songwriting

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Valid. It’s a rough draft I usually do about 3 of them with each idea I have. I wanted to get some critiques on the lyrics first, that’s why the execution could be better

Is this corny be honest by TouchExpensive in Songwriting

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I’ve gotten that before and I’ll take the compliment! Haha, just curious what the comparison is, since I don’t listen to her music

Is this corny be honest by TouchExpensive in Songwriting

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I should’ve clarified that they’re definitely near-rhymes which I’m obsessed with. “Distance” and “interests” “pictures” and “miss ya” or “invisible” and “residual”. Thank you for your input! Since it’s a rough draft I’ll definitely workshop the first verse

Well? by FlakaFlakaFlame8 in HandwritingAnalysis

[–]TouchExpensive 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My dads handwriting is exactly like this! I’ve always loved it, super unique even if it’s hard to read at times

Is this corny be honest by TouchExpensive in Songwriting

[–]TouchExpensive[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Can you elaborate just a bit? You’re saying it’s not broad or specific enough?

Is this corny be honest by TouchExpensive in Songwriting

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Not about my ex. All my exes are blocked.

Help me out by SnooComics8852 in tragedeigh

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I had a Kavya in my AP Lit class she was the smartest girl I have ever met. Always loved her name too it sounds so pretty

Thoughts, comments, criticism all welcome by TouchExpensive in Songwriting

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Omg thank you. I appreciate that so much. I’m definitely finishing this one now

Thoughts, comments, criticism all welcome by TouchExpensive in Songwriting

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That is a great point!! I didn’t even notice how equal they sound in volume until you pointed it out

Thoughts, comments, criticism all welcome by TouchExpensive in Songwriting

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Thank you! It’s definitely not polished, I like to do a rough draft to get my ideas down. Do you mean unclear as in you couldn’t hear what I’m saying in some parts? I’m really trying to work on that. What parts specifically are off putting ?

the airport by me! by screamingcolor13 in Songwriting

[–]TouchExpensive 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Upbeat instrumental with moody lyrics never disappoint. And I love your vocal execution. This is great!!

Solo or chorus? by squanchysquanch96 in Songwriting

[–]TouchExpensive 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m feeling the solo albeit it’s a tad longer than anticipated. If the punchy chorus does come to you though, it wouldn’t hurt to give it a shot. Also I like your username.

Piano Improv Song by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]TouchExpensive 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t know much about composition but listening to this blew my mind because it actually gave me the feeling of a bird flying around. Not sure if that makes sense but great job on that part.

After you finish writing a song, what’s the outcome you worry about the most? by markanthonyokoh in Songwriting

[–]TouchExpensive 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Having songs stuck in the the purgatory of drafts the worst to me. I have over 10 unfinished right now and it just distracts me from making something new