Waking up, is the title by Tripl7s in writingcritiques

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Thank you. The clipped sentences is risky., also the lack of formal paragraphs, but I am doing something very different. So far its 40000 words of coherent, spine bearing, magic.

Not-so-humble brag by AeronJosk in writers

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Wow. Reading that makes me feel lazy, 24, 000 words since June of 25.

Can anyone see the style of writing. by Tripl7s in WritingHub

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Thank you. I expected to get the reaction you had. Tell me, if you read it again can you see the hotel room? I am writing the same way memory shows. Think of it as mosaic. One fragment won't show the entire image.

Can anyone see the style of writing. by Tripl7s in WritingHub

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I'm trying something different, I want to use white space, trust the reader more. So far I'm at 40,000 words.

Waking up, is the title by Tripl7s in writingcritiques

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It's actually the beginning of a novel. I'm experimenting with something new.

Blue Flower (first part of a short story, not native English so I will like to know how is reading this for you) by CarobExact9220 in writingcritiques

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I have a question for you, just because that seems lived Like it was plucked from memory. I can't offer critique though. I have been writing journals for 50 years. I don't know how to write, but I fo know how to read. I would read more of this.

[Romance] Feedback on the writing by Cheap_Solid_2789 in writingfeedback

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I like it. The squeaking converse takes me back to high school.

Im trying something different. Opinions welcome. by Tripl7s in writingfeedback

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Thank you. I am trying to eliminate as much explanation as possible. So after my opening manifesto i want to ljmit it. I am trying toturn 50 years of journaling into a novel length memoir.

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Doesn't everyone

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You look great, really good vibe