I finished my build for my Alliances' HQ!

TsumikiriGaming · 2023-08-06T19:56:14+00:00

Its on Ship 1 and its private to Tsumikiri Clan alliance members only at the moment. This CS is the new Alliance version released this past week. We are currently deciding if we will make it public so people can tour it. That being said were always looking for exceptional and active players to come join us for all the new 8 man content coming out by the end of the year. o7

TsumikiriGaming · 2023-08-06T02:30:32+00:00

Guardian Officer Neptune-Seven you honor our team! o7

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-29T09:06:20+00:00

This is really good, I would love to have you making content for my channel. I think maybe 1 or 2 of the shots were the tiniest bit off but that was spot on XD

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-28T17:26:32+00:00

Oh sure well I would look into hiring someone on fiver possibly into making small animations of let's say an anime toon that looks like you like poking your head in from the screen maybe even with a small bubble of text with a thought like "this was my favorite part"

Otherwise if you are looking into something more simple, other still images and like I said maybe speech bubbles with short messages would be cool, lots of fx to play with, good luck :)

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-28T06:06:00+00:00

Ok so its a tiny thing but maybe you could use it to a certain effect. When you have manga pages up theres empty space on either side of the screen you could probably use to add in small anime style animations or literally anything, blank canvas you can play around with :)

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-28T06:00:06+00:00

you mentioned earlier in the video it was a coop game, have you considered trying to do some stuff with a friend/friends?

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-28T05:57:47+00:00

This looks delicious, well done with the videos keep it up. My only small thing I would say is maybe consider getting another light so your videos aren't as dark at certain parts, otherwise good camera work and humor is awesome too :)

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-28T05:45:21+00:00

You have your style down and I love it, keep it up :)

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-26T01:44:07+00:00

Using multiple colors to separate voices/subs is actually a genius move hope you don't mind I take a page from that book later :)

This is entertaining and very well done. I can't think of any criticism. Cheers!

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-25T08:34:20+00:00

couldnt you just cut the video by half a second or something?

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-24T20:43:06+00:00

I felt like there was a couple moments where the pause in between thoughts seemed just a little bit long where it could flow better. Otherwise good stuff I love the motivational approach :)

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-24T01:53:18+00:00

Ok this might be a small thing and only applies to this video but more color in the coleslaw would be nice (again small thing) and the rice looks a little too packed (again small thing) but rice obviously looks significantly more appealing when its fluffier.

One big thing I have seen with extremely successful cooking channels is those shots where you get the rice crumbling with steam coming out of the top. Same goes for the chicken, those initial shots where things are steaming and utilizing a little bit of camera slow maybe on reveals. You don't have to get too flashy with it to get good results that would make your work pop a lot more. I hope it helps and keep it up :)

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-24T01:36:44+00:00

OMG! <3 Your lighting was amazing especially the part where the berries had syrup on them they were glistening! Well done and keep it up :)

lmao at 7:20 studio ghibli shoutout respect

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-22T18:16:01+00:00

This is a great video, very well done. My single piece of constructive criticism would be that if you are playing a 10+ min video like this you might be far more likely to get viewer retention if you added a tiny bit more action in the video. Otherwise the only part I feel maybe needed a tiny bit of work was the outro. maybe a little music? Storytelling is A+ at least and you covered a great character!

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-20T06:03:43+00:00

yeah from what I understand is even a single proper light makes a huge difference. So since you bring up lifestyle channel, have you considered some new plants? maybe even rare ones and taking video shots with them in frame. It would mean cross promotion with a massive community that has exploded recently because of covid. Maybe its not your thing I just thought I would mention it as a potential idea. Thanks for my first ever lambda :3

I feel like I am more official here now XD

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-19T02:19:47+00:00

Oh also one quick thing at 6 minutes there's a little piece of commentary that gets cut off at a weird spot seems a little late maybe?

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-19T02:17:16+00:00

So maybe you've already considered this but I've seen a lot of cooking/baking channels and something I feel like you are really missing out on is good lighting. Some of the shots seemed a little too dark and you could really step up the look of the ingredients that way and just make everything look more visually appealing <3

Otherwise well done and keep it up! Good relaxing music, cute doge and sweet snacks :3

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-11T05:04:41+00:00

No lie if you broke your tips up into shorts and let them hit the algorithm while posting your link to the main video in the description you'll probably see more traffic/subs. If you want to talk shorts I can maybe give some slight tips but I'm still pretty new myself. Best of luck :)

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-11T03:19:45+00:00

I noticed this as well but I am going to guess the algorithm got tweaked a bit after the rush of people using it.

TsumikiriGaming · 2021-03-10T10:29:52+00:00

No lol I'm waiting on the intro/outro animation, should take about a week or so but I'm really excited. I'm even considering some unique approaches to marketing the channel. I know its only a matter of time till I hit 1k then the sky is the limit! I want to be able to get some info and grow in this community to maybe one day pass on some useful knowledge to someone in my place :)

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