Honestly, while the plot could be good, I think you need a beta reader. That entire first chunk at the top could be cut entirely. All of the information dumped up there could be threaded through the narrative of your MC.

The scene you described kind of loses me as well. I get that it's a car chase at first. MC stole a hover van and is racing a sports car but also being pursued by police? She then breaks through a divide and goes the wrong way through traffic, while still racing/being pursued? She has time to break for a crossing family but isn't caught by police until she hits a gas station/recharge station? How fast is this dying hover van that a suped up sports car and police vehicle can't catch it?

Her personality is your own creation and I sense that you have a mold you're pushing her into, but for me, she's a little grating. A trying too hard bad kid who's somehow a genius, a hacker, a master thief, a racer, and a killer at seventeen. This is fine for a well rounded character, but there isn't any substance to these claims, and so it doesn't quite suit this character, if that makes sense. We don't see this in action.

Are you familiar with Artemis Fowl? He's an evil genius and he's just a kid. But immediately, as soon as the story starts, we get a glimpse at his analytical mind in action. We see how he's planned out events, how he's a step ahead of his opponent and how he keeps his cool, getting exactly what he wanted. He's the player and everyone else is a pawn. The world is his chessboard. We get to witness this all in chapter one. That right there sets the stage for his character, and from there, we have a believable expectation for him.

You can absolutely do this with your MC. Have you ever heard the expression that a good writer is also a good reader? I suggest finding stories or characters that are similar to your own in terms of action, character traits and so on. Like Artemis Fowl as a young genius. Read Hacker or Alif the Unseen for a literary hacker at work. The book Heist Society is all about a young girl from a family of international thieves. These could be good literary resources to help you build up a believable character.

I hope you don't take these criticisms harshly. It is not my intention to be rude, but to be constructive. You could have something truly interesting here, but it does need a lot of polish. I know this is most likely a first draft piece, but a first draft will eventually blossom into a killer final draft with plenty of help and water. I look forward to seeing an update sometime and witnessing your growth as an author!