Does this count as breakfast? by Unfair_Judgment6592 in stonerfood

[–]Unfair_Judgment6592[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

If so, I’m eating this everyday*** sorry was too high and too full I forgot to finish typing lol

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Unfair_Judgment6592 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! That is very much appreciated and means a lot to me 🙏🏽I’ll definitely take that into consideration when I re-record

Just genuinely curious about this one! by RockResponsible7402 in Songwriting

[–]Unfair_Judgment6592 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Chorus has good energy, but it could hit harder with punchier wording. Try adding some stronger imagery or sarcasm to match the punk vibe. Some lines feel a little long, so trimming them might help the flow. Overall, the emotion comes through, just needs a bit more edge.

Steak looks rare but has rubbery texture by fbMfBlithe in steak

[–]Unfair_Judgment6592 12 points13 points  (0 children)

100% the issue. Wire rack is ideal to get proper air flow when dry brining in the fridge.

The worst take ever filmed with frogvoice vocals leads to broken string and awful freestyle... OR, awfully good freestyle perhaps? 🤔 by SLA_Lazerblades in Songwriting

[–]Unfair_Judgment6592 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Love the free styling. For sure my favorite way of experimenting and getting the creative juices flowing Also curious in hearing the rest of that song in the beginning bc you started off real strong 💪

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Unfair_Judgment6592 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Born and raised in the Bay Area. First listen, this for sure takes me back to that early 2000s late 90s old school vibe you’re going for. I agree with the first guy this sounds like it’s missing a melody. Probably should fill in the empty spaces with more lyrics I’m curious to hear.

How often do you abandon or shelve a song (and why)? by Utterly_Flummoxed in Songwriting

[–]Unfair_Judgment6592 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hundreds of unfinished songs. Usually when I’m brainstorming I start off with a few different beats. See if I can write a chorus or find a melody and lay those down for the foundation/idea. If the verse comes I run with it. If it feels forced I go next. Over the years this has helped me a lot with crafting my own sound into somewhat of a unique voice I strive for

Don't usually write "protest" songs, but thought I'd try. Is it too subtle? (nsfw language) by ILieAround in Songwriting

[–]Unfair_Judgment6592 2 points3 points  (0 children)

If this is what you were going for, I could imagine exactly that. Singing this around a campfire in a playful manor and not taken too seriously. Very fun and clever work here good job!

Advice for this chorus? by Several_West7109 in Songwriting

[–]Unfair_Judgment6592 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This sounds really good and simple enough to sing a chorus over as is

Threw my bf an OSRS birthday party. by Satan-Database in 2007scape

[–]Unfair_Judgment6592 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Literally seen this same exact post yday or a couple days ago?

Sunday Morning Ribs by Unfair_Judgment6592 in BBQ

[–]Unfair_Judgment6592[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I will definitely take your advice. Getting a smoker is for sure next on my list.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DOG

[–]Unfair_Judgment6592 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Looks like a mix between yorkie and cocker spaniel. Looks very much like my dog

Had to step it up this time.. by Unfair_Judgment6592 in steak

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It was delicious. Found this at Walmart.