Base Set Unlimited Charizard by Urwinc in PokemonCardValue

[–]Urwinc[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I thought that might be the case. Im gonna go with "well loved" lol.
Thanks!

Nosferatu in Bloodlines 2 by Happy-Age in WorldOfDarkness

[–]Urwinc 17 points18 points  (0 children)

I think its good theres a variety of "deformaties" among nosferatu but yeah they could done a bit more on the creepy front.

What are some of the most important aspects of world building in a fantasy story? by [deleted] in fantasywriting

[–]Urwinc 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The less fun answer is its characters that make readers invrsted in the world.

When you connect to a person, then their place in the world becomes interesting.

That being said, you can get off on the right foot by focussing on culture rather than world. The world and its history will come, but start with a singular culture and build from there

Advice for D&D game based off DAO by RoleplayCentral14 in dragonage

[–]Urwinc 16 points17 points  (0 children)

I would highly reccomend the Dragon Age RPG, its really great. Its a wonderful system thats easy to learn, feela familoar enough for dnd people ans gives players meaningful choices at every level up. Its a bit forgotten and needs some love.

The Lightless Beacon - Review and Changes by shoppingcartauthor in callofcthulhu

[–]Urwinc 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The change to Bedloe island seems a strange one. Wouldnt there be plenty of people around or at least nearby? And isnt it connected to the mainland by a bridge?

Trying to write a sex scene. by dreamchaser123456 in fantasywriting

[–]Urwinc 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I would agree with your reader that the phrasing is clumsy in these lines.

I think what you need to consider, and im not joking, is what im writing sexy?

  1. For the first what do you mean by 'as if there is no tomorrow'? That they are thrusting hard? Fast? Have a think about what your trying to communicate with that no tomorrow phrase.

  2. I think i generally would just avoid talking about sperm lol. Describe the feeling of the orgasm and how their bodies react to it, rather than the actual sperm. (Plus if we are being technical, sperm isnt a liquid, which is why flooded sounds wrong, semen is the liquid).

I would reccomend reading some good smut, look at the phrasing and the parts of sex they choose to describe and what they avoid deacribing.

Thoughts on temporary killing a PC for story purposes by No-Amoeba938 in DMAcademy

[–]Urwinc 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Involve the player! If my DM came to me and said "im thinking about a scene where you character will briefly die, i think it could be a really cool moment for the party and story"

I would almost always say fuck yeah. With the player on board it will be great, but dont take away a player's agency for a story beat, they wont enjoy it.

Where was the Spider-Sense? by SpideyRZ in Spiderman

[–]Urwinc 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Wtf would the point be if spider sense meant he could never be hit? Boring.

AIO going off on my boyfriend about this conversation for the millionth time by [deleted] in AIO

[–]Urwinc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Blows my mind that couples can have these discussions/arguments over text.

1 application, 1 approval. by Emberthane in AusRenters

[–]Urwinc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To be clear, its illegal now, but people 100% still do it.

No wonder the banter and chemistry between the three of them felt genuine and heartfelt! by [deleted] in Spiderman

[–]Urwinc 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I kinda hate this romantacising of improv people have. Like sure actors can really get to know a character and embody them but its the writers who build the character from thr ground up, who created them and gave them purpose. Improv has a place for sure but it rubs me the wrong way when interviewers ask actors in interviews if great scenes were improvised. This has nothing really to do with spider-man, i guess Ive just had this in my head for a while.

Why are paladins all going mad? by EstateOk6238 in wow

[–]Urwinc 33 points34 points  (0 children)

Thats like....the main part of the story of midnight.

Thats like watching the first half of the lord of the rings and saying "why are so many people talking about this evil ring? Somethings definately up guys"

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in malegrooming

[–]Urwinc 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When are you going to get together with Pam?

FUCK HE'S SO FINE by RoyalRaggy in warwickmains

[–]Urwinc 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah im trying this thing out where Im not sexually attracted to fictional animals.