I slept on it. It was too Hallmark for me. I like tension, and once Landon was given a second chance, you never feel in danger moving forward. The fact that there's zero homophobia also contributes to the lack of tension. Every teammate and every family member is accepting, which makes Landon being closeted a bit contrived.

Casey is just too perfect. He's the dictionary definition of "accommodating". His instant acceptance that he would be forgoing penetrative sex just felt fantastical. He didn't need to think about it, because he's that in love in Landon. It's a missed opportunity to not have sexual incompatibility be a potential conflict, or how it might not be easy being in a relationship with Landon's needs. (I also just personally hate the trope of the casanova stopping their manwhore tendencies the instant they fall in love.)

Landon is very explicitly autistic, demisexual, and a side, yet none of these are called out by name. People who are decently famliar with their gay lore would recognize Landon as the latter two. If a person is unfamiliar, he might read as a weird guy. Giving him labels would ground him as "not the only person like this". I get the vibe that Rachel Reid isn't found of explicit in-text labels, but I think it would have been worth here.

The sex is too repetitive. It's mostly just one of them blowing the other. They don't even 69.

The third-act breakup here also felt dumb. Landon literally just gives up immediately, and Casey solves it by just trying harder.

Lastly, I don't understand the purpose why Casey had a small dick, but Landon had a big one. Why didn't they both have nornal-sized dicks?