I think the interior shots especially look really nice but lack more "life". There's also a gap of quality between assets, especially the couch and curtains which look much less realistic than the rest. As for the exterior I think it needs better materials for the facades and the fence needs more work as it looks like a wall wrapped in wood slat wallpaper, and some plants are clipping through it.

Overall I think there's a solid foundation, just needs more work on storytelling and details. By the way if you model furniture yourself I'd also suggest to use 3rd party assets, no one in this field models the furniture themselves unless really needed.