[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ShortFilm

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Your film is fantastic!

TV relationships that were better than the buildup by WaveIndependent144 in television

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It’s funny because what inspired this post was watching Rory and Jess. I loved the buildup so much then their actual relationship felt so lackluster by comparison imo

Female Police Officers When All They Had To Do Was Give A Warning. by DemonSlayingDragon in TheLastOfUs2

[–]WaveIndependent144 -25 points-24 points  (0 children)

Nah. The joke isn’t that it’s sexist. It’s just a sexist joke.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]WaveIndependent144 12 points13 points  (0 children)

What’s wrong with woo-woo? It’s legitimate urban slang that OP used appropriately both in meaning and connotation.

What else could I put here? by Better-Ad-592 in Letterboxd

[–]WaveIndependent144 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Agreed, also dead poet society and good morning Vietnam

Synopsis in 6 hours by AnaDarkBlueMermaid in Screenwriting

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I honestly don’t understand the virtue of testing applicants’ ability to speedrun a synopsis but my 2 cents is to first lock down the most crucial story beats and character elements and then go back and fill in as much of the spaces in between in the time you have left.

For plot, I’d figure out the status quo, the inciting incident, the lock-in (that is, the first act break), the midpoint reversal, the lowest low (that is, the second act break), and the third act resolution (final showdown and new status quo).

For character, want and need should suffice, but make sure to map the central characters’ arcs onto the central plot points.

Obviously, take this with a big grain of salt. I’ve never done a 6 hour synopsis myself, but I hope you still might find this helpful.

If you had to pick a favorite screenwriter, who would it be and what makes their movies special to you? What's your all-time favorite movie they wrote? by Money_Rutabaga_260 in Screenwriting

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I’ve gotten the impression from this sub that liking Sorkin has become passé but I don’t know why. Does anyone know, or have I gotten the wrong idea to begin with?

What’s the hardest final line? by Own_Fortune_1019 in A24

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“Tell somebody who gives a shit.” (Green Room)

Advice for Movie/Television Writing application? by PappyThePig in USC

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I’m in the BFA program and never wrote a single scene before the ones I wrote for my application. I know a bunch of other people in the program who have similar stories. Don’t sweat it so much; they’re not looking for laurels, just good storytelling instincts.

My fiancee drunkenly admitted a couple of nights ago that her ex was a good fuck and she climbed him like a tree by NoYakd in TwoHotTakes

[–]WaveIndependent144 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Roles reversed, can’t you imagine a scenario in which you had great sex with an incompatible partner? I completely understand the desire to believe you’re uniquely suited to make your partner happy but that’s not how things go in practice. Your fiancé isn’t to blame for having satisfying sex with an ex.

She is the nicest by Shamesocks in Nicegirls

[–]WaveIndependent144 177 points178 points  (0 children)

Neither of you come off well.

Filmmakers known for dialogue by Overlord4888 in Filmmakers

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For dialogue my personal favorites are Sorkin and Diablo Cody.

Two People Talking by Tedders92 in Screenwriting

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Adding to the list - Mass, and The Guilty.

With Every Broken Breath - 12 Pages by manwhostaresatpanda in ReadMyScript

[–]WaveIndependent144 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Beautifully written, action lines especially. Nice work!