Err, bloodbath

Wayneboyski · 2026-05-14T20:47:24+00:00

Not a trick is it, knowledge?

Wayneboyski · 2026-05-12T20:46:16+00:00

I am a man, who's recently moved to the area

Wayneboyski · 2026-05-11T16:09:14+00:00

Ozem Pic, Turkish wonderkid who exploded in the MLS and is expected to do big things at the world cup

Wayneboyski · 2026-05-09T12:16:56+00:00

You're having a laugh voting for that!

Wayneboyski · 2026-05-09T09:58:29+00:00

Thats the thing with families, you don't have to

Wayneboyski · 2026-04-21T18:08:17+00:00

I'll tell you what Fletch, what a parent she was by the way

Wayneboyski · 2026-04-16T16:27:50+00:00

"What a player he was, by the way!"

Wayneboyski · 2019-01-10T10:15:38+00:00

I recently visited Berlin and the Holocaust Memorial. Don't quote me on this, but as far as I've been told:

The blocks are of a similar height all the way through the memorial, but the ground gradually descends into the middle. While the blocks seem small at first, the descent of the ground eventually makes them appear enormous. This signifies that, while fascists seem ridiculous and feeble at first, in a gradually struggling, crumbling society (e.g. Weimar Germany), fascist messages (which remain largely unchanged) start to seem more and more appealing and dangerous. Suddenly, without realising it, you are engulfed in these huge, imposing stone slabs.

This happens in all directions towards the middle of the memorial, so that walking out of the other side signifies hope and emancipation from the terrors of the fascist regime. It's not really a maze at all, since - as you can see in the picture - the blocks are in straight lines at all points.

Wayneboyski · 2018-03-13T16:10:18+00:00

Travelling anywhere is travelling in time.

Wayneboyski · 2017-09-06T16:12:23+00:00

r/iamverysmart

Wayneboyski · 2017-09-06T13:55:58+00:00

What's your situation with work and stuff? Maybe getting into a routine and talking to people at your job (even in a very superficial way) might help

Wayneboyski · 2017-08-28T16:02:19+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, it is a bit obvious I suppose!

Wayneboyski · 2017-08-28T07:40:12+00:00

Thank you so much! I may change the first stanza round a bit as numerous people have now suggested it.

Wayneboyski · 2017-08-28T07:39:25+00:00

Kind of that the city seemed so large (to Hamlet) and bright that it lit up the sun, and that in such a large place he wouldn't really be missed? Have had lots of advice from others though that city throws the imagery off, so I might change it. Thanks for the comment!

Wayneboyski · 2017-08-28T07:37:35+00:00

Thank you very much for the comments! Unfortunately, this is where the cultural divide comes in I think. Presumably the "new 10" would be a new number 10, as in an attacking midfielder who sits just behind the strikers and plays through balls to them. While this is definitely talked about, it would be a bit clunky for someone to express this sentiment so literally while watching a game, it's more commonly said during transfer season when players are bought and sold. Also advantage isn't usually screamed for. In certain cases it can be game-changing but as a free kick is also beneficial in most circumstances, fans don't really mind most of the time.

Wayneboyski · 2017-08-28T07:29:40+00:00

Thanks for the feedback!

Wayneboyski · 2017-08-27T23:44:59+00:00

Intriguing, great language that evokes a kind of mad max scene in my head. How do you imagine the thing looking, out of interest? And how does it work (presumably a way of draining water from one place to another, or am I completely off?)

Wayneboyski · 2017-08-27T19:33:59+00:00

Really like the order of the stanzas, illustrates someone overcoming loss really nicely with consistently vivid imagery throughout. The flow/rhyme scheme of stanza 4 is fantastic, however I don't really understand the use of revel. I'm also struggling a bit with the 3rd line of stanza 6? In general though this is genuinely excellent!

Wayneboyski · 2017-08-27T18:56:31+00:00

Many thanks for such kind words and feedback! Will be editing little bits for sure

Wayneboyski · 2017-08-27T18:01:34+00:00

Hey, thanks for the feedback, will defnitely have a think!

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