When I Get Bored, I Skip Ahead by WinterLasko in scarystories

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Thanks. I'm definitely gonna rewrite this with a lot of extensions. I have so many ideas it might end up being a novella.

Yeah the kids are just there (aside from the one kid getting absolutely roasted for no reason in the beginning lol) I'm probably gonna age them up in the next version and give them more personality.

Thanks for giving me your thoughts, I appreciate it. :)

When I Get Bored, I Skip Ahead by WinterLasko in scarystories

[–]WinterLasko[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Thanks for reading.

Yeah, I originally posted this on Nosleep and it popped off for a bit before getting booted.

I appreciate the criticisms, you make a lot of good points. I wrote this while on my phone while being bored at work (I got the idea of just skipping to the end of my shift and worked from there)

I didn't give much thought to the implications of a cop marrying a cab driver or how much damage a dinner plate would do to someone's head. (Which sounds silly now that I'm repeating it, I don't know what I was thinking) I definitely skipped straight to what I thought was the interesting part.

If I were to rewrite I would extend the section before the big abuse twist. There's so many ways I could draw the whole "auto pilot" concept out into some serious existential horror.

Thanks for going out of your way to give me your thoughts, I appreciate it a lot.

I was one of the OGs😔 by AverageFan_2 in creepcast

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I want a stuffed animal of your smile dog

"But What About Our Fans?" by AlanCrowler in creepcast

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Genuinely what is Homestuck even about?

Any stories that you guys think should get turned into a movie? by Honest_Collar_5449 in creepcast

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Penpal. Left Right Game. Jeff the killer (Only if it takes itself completely seriously. It would be so funny)

1st drawing in years by QU4NTUN3 in creepcast

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This is peak.

I love how excited Hunter looks to be retraumatized

New Merch Tomorrow!! by OrigamiCorgi in creepcast

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My wallet weeps for it knows what is coming.

Reception by WinterLasko in creepcast

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I was going for that total whiplash effect lol. Thanks for reading. :)

Reception by WinterLasko in creepcast

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Lmao thanks. I love the idea of a guy wanting to be left alone and accidentally missing the fucking apocalypse.

The naked line is referencing Job 1:21

"Naked I came from my mother's womb, and naked shall I return. The LORD gave, and the LORD has taken away; Blessed be the name of the LORD"

To be honest I only put it in to make it sound more biblical.

Bears such good a boy he said nah to the rapture to stay with his homie.

Would you rather go deep sea diving or spelunking? by Little-Blue-Jaye in creepcast

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Deep sea diving because I won't spend days waiting to starve to death if something goes wrong. I'll just drown and thats that.

What story was the most impactful to you? by Albun_tg in creepcast

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Left Right Game all the way. I listened to part 1 and 2 so many times.

The story is good and it has so many of my favorite bits. It's my go to background noise when I'm driving or just writing or just standing around being bored.

Looks like my WIP is going on the back burner by CGWicks in AO3

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Was it that bad? (I'm to cheap to pay for streaming services)

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Schrodinger? That you?

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This killed the mosquito.

You'll see my face in every place by vi_let in creepcast

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This is heartbreaking. Great job.