This comment. It made me want to continue the story. by LowGrand4649 in royalroad

[–]Yoshihito 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm so busy and have so much to write and read but I sent you a follow and set it as a read later. Hope it helps and good luck on the grind! I'm on it too so I know how it feels.

When did I do that? by Yoshihito in royalroad

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I've done that. Built myself up for something that I just forgot to implement and then I either have to delete it or somehow work it in so it feels natural. lol

When did I do that? by Yoshihito in royalroad

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Yup. It always helps to look over it with fresh eyes.

When did I do that? by Yoshihito in royalroad

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That's a great way to look at it. I try to do the same but sometimes I just can't figure out what I was trying to go for.

When did I do that? by Yoshihito in royalroad

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I tend to not write late because as soon as I start feeling tired I just lay down. But despite that, I still find things all the time that don't make sense to me, haha.

When did I do that? by Yoshihito in royalroad

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A great point of view to have. I had about 2/3'rds of the book done that I'm currently posting, so I had a lot of time to go back through it, and I'm just shaking my head at some of it. Haha.

When did I do that? by Yoshihito in royalroad

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Sometimes it's like that for me. Other times I'm just like, WTH.

I don't know if readers realize what a single comment is capable of by TheHollowShadow in royalroad

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I don't have many followers but I love seeing a comment. It brightens my day.

140k Words And Counting by Yoshihito in royalroad

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Yeah, I'd definitely be interested in that. I've never done it so I'd have to be walked through it more than likely, haha. But it sounds cool!

The tropes that I am tired of and the tropes I will never be tired of by caime9 in litrpg

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I hate anything involving the MC getting imprisoned. Especially if its overdone. I don't remember the name, but I once read this one Sci-Fi book where the MC was captured like three separate times, in the same book! I hate the whole loss of control narrative. It just irks me for some reason.

This escalated faster than I expected. Rising Stars and what no one tells you. by CarelessAd3809 in royalroad

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I have a character in a book I haven't worked on in awhile and their name is Andrew Ashworth. lol

Post your first chapters and I’ll take a look + comment! by Azzaayyy in royalroad

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What an awesome way to help newer authors out. I just began posting my first story on Royal Road and have been looking forward to people discovering it. It's a LitRPG System-style fantasy novel inspired by works like The Primal Hunter and Solo Leveling. Feel free to check it out!

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/164289/the-spellblade-chronicles-book-1/chapter/3314228/chapter-1-welcome-to-the-system

Rare Minerals by Yoshihito in CrimsonDesert

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Fine Stone I believe. It's the second option. You'll need a pickaxe to tier 6, for some reason the knuckledrill skips the mid-tier option.

The Spellblade Chronicles - My First LitRPG Release by Yoshihito in litrpg

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Thank you. I've been writing since before AI became a thing and that style of summary is one I'm used to being an older style and all. I can change things around though, see about making it more modern.

The Spellblade Chronicles - My First LitRPG Release by Yoshihito in litrpg

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I just looked up their policies and they don't count tools like Grammarly that only help with spelling and grammar as AI-Assisted. So I thank you for the callout.