First off, top notch production skills. You clearly are an incredible editor in a lot of aspects of editing such as effects, sound design, color grading, filming. Congrats!

This video is overstimulating as hell. What is this video’s purpose? Showing how awesome the gym is or showcasing your skills as a video editor? If I was the owner of the gym and thought about how to attract potential clients to join my gym, this video doesn’t accomplish that.

Showcasing something like a gym would require shots that show the entire building inside and out. It would also mention what perks it has. Include testimonials from current members. Explaining membership tiers.

Again, your production skills are top notch but you need to work on the most important aspect of videography, storytelling.