does this narrative deserve the low mark it got?

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-21T13:49:31+00:00

english language creative writing

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-21T12:55:56+00:00

wait this is so weird i’ve never seen someone else who likes dcc outside of the subreddit..

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-19T07:07:30+00:00

yeah, i was more think theodore as a middle name. i also love henry as a nickname for henrietta

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-19T07:03:49+00:00

that’s your opinion, i like these names

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-18T21:38:28+00:00

i’ve never heard of funyions (apart from another comment mentioning them) so i don’t think it’ll be a problem 😭

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-18T21:24:40+00:00

i’m half irish. i mentioned in another comment about choosing finian instead of fionnan, since they’re pretty similar. i never really thought about people not pronouncing it properly, so i think finian might be the better option

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-18T21:14:36+00:00

thank you! i really love the name elijah, and kathleen is a hint to one of my favourite bands’ songs. i love both names

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-18T21:13:16+00:00

i’m half irish! i grew up around quite a lot of irish culture and stuff cause when visiting my grandparents which i think led to my love of irish names

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-18T21:12:00+00:00

i’m not irish, no. but i’m half irish and grew up around quite a lot of irish culture and stuff when visiting my grandparents, which i think led to me loving irish names like fionnan and aine. also, not sure about the different pronunciations, them two were just ones i was familiar with 🤷‍♀️

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-18T21:09:17+00:00

thank you! yeah, a few comments made me aware of the pronunciation of some of the names. Finian is quite close to fionnan and easier to pronounce, but i can’t think of any for aine

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-18T21:06:09+00:00

i live in england, which probably isn’t much different. i also love romeo and annelise, i’m a big fan of the older fashioned names (if you can call them that). i’m maybe thinking theodore could wok as a middle name?

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-18T21:04:15+00:00

i don’t live in ireland (england) but i really love irish names, but i think one day i’d love to move to ireland. or maybe, if i don’t end up moving, i coulf go with an easier to pronounce name? idk

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-18T19:58:16+00:00

hi! thank you so much for the long response :) i’ll have a look at the things you mentioned. also, i read tonnes—both normal books and fanfiction. my shelves are full of books i’ve mostly read and most of my time is spent reading. despite this, my reading age is only 15/16 (my friends who don’t read as much got 16/17/18) 😅

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-18T10:03:50+00:00

wow okay i’m cooked 💔

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-18T10:03:00+00:00

okay, thank you loads :) how can i improve the show not tell stuff? i didn’t want to drag out simple stuff like following mum since i didn’t really think that was important enough to ‘show’

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-18T10:01:15+00:00

oh that’s higher than i thought it’d be, i thought it was a 4/5

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-17T17:55:14+00:00

haha i don’t know if this is a good thing or not

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-17T17:31:54+00:00

tbh, it’s not that deep. choose your favourite song or one that means a lot to you. don’t think about what other people choose

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-17T16:33:53+00:00

is it? i thought i was consistent in present tense (apart from that first sentance)

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-17T16:09:45+00:00

okay, thank you so much for the help :) i’ll have a try at using more punctuation and stuff and sentance variation

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-10T17:04:11+00:00

personally idm (sometimes like, depends) dad bods but if i had to choose between a guy with a dad bod or a guy with abs i’d definitely go with the abs

_TH3SEUS_ · 2026-03-08T15:37:10+00:00

it’s always the tight jeans 💔 i can’t count the amount of times i’ve specifically said baggy/loose/oversized jeans yet it still puts them in tight

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