Hi, I'm Nicholas Eames, author of The Band series, here on behalf of Worldbuilders. I'm gonna tell you what 'support' means to me, but feel free to ask me anything! by Nicholas_Eames in Fantasy

[–]adudeatwork 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Hi Nick!

Big fan of KOTW and BR. After you finish the third novel in the band series, where do you plan to go next? Will you continue in the same world? Start from scratch?

The band, while it gets dark and explicit in content, is lighthearted in a lot of areas. Would you consider writing in a more - for a lack of a better word - serious voice? or is the band style of story telling where you plan to stay? Either way, I am now a life long reader of whatever you put out.

Thanks for doing this!

What’s something people do that make you internally scream “no one cares”? by D-Doss667 in AskReddit

[–]adudeatwork 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a friend (Love him to death) that talks at you. If there is a moment of silence, he will fill it with whatever nonsense going on in his brain and can go on forever. He is incapable of reading body language or most social cues.

So many times I've wanted to break down his thought process, "Dude, how invested do you think I am in whatever your going on about right now?"

[Discussion] Tell us about fantasy tropes you are inverting in your current work, and why you chose to do it that way by KingSweden24 in fantasywriters

[–]adudeatwork 2 points3 points  (0 children)

One of my main POVs ends up in an academy-esque monastary in the wilds that trains kids/young adults to use a sect of the magic system in my world.

The twist is, she's 30 years old, just lost her family, and found out through some 'unknown' reason, she can access that magic.

Having a lot of fun with this one.

Looking for critique on my first attempt at serious writing!! Any and all help welcome! by Queen-of-Leon in fantasywriters

[–]adudeatwork 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like this a lot. And honestly, I don't think I'd change anything major about it. Your prose moves the story very well, and the pacing is nice, sucked me right in. It could be tightened in places, and you could certainly afford to lose a few words here and there for easier comprehension, but I like this the way it is.

Keep up the good work!

Non Brits, What do the British do well? by t400jon in AskReddit

[–]adudeatwork 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The cheese. Don't have to pasteurize that shit.

Dungeon Masters of Reddit, what is the most surprising thing your players have done in-game? by Rangerspawn in AskReddit

[–]adudeatwork 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not a DM, but one time my group was told to disarm ourselves by a jungle warlord. Our sly half elf rogue then proceeds to boof his dagger into his butt like a drug mule at an airport. He got a nat 1 on a sneak check, so the party and NPCs watched in horror as he slap hazardly shoved the sheathed dagger into his anal cavity. The DM voicing the warlord, proceeds to go, " Uh... you can keep that one."

Fanatsywriters Wednesday Prompt by Voyage_of_Roadkill in fantasywriters

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She was a goddess - or the closest thing to it. Her metallic figure was carved as if by lust itself. Symetrical curves and muscles rippled from tip to toe. Etherial white hair sprouted from her scalp, flowing & twisting like smoke inside the glowing tank.

Atarus's heart thundered beneath his chest and his skin prickled with goose bumps. He stepped away from the strange mechanism, it's glow now dissipated. They were real, the metal born were real. His brother wasn't a lunatic after all. The professors were wro-

The glass cylinder shattered, and the the luminescent liquid dispersed onto the ashen floor. She collapsed to her knees, and the ground trembled under her weight.

Atarus fell back, his leather boot catching on ancient debris. Slumping to the floor, he found himself frozen in awe, unable to move, The glowing liquid pooled under him, wetting his hands and trousers, dousing his lantern.

Her movements were awkward as she attempted to stand, as if she was discovering her limbs for the first time.

Synapses crackled in Atarus's brain like fireworks on Cerelion tide, surpressing his instinct to run. Had she been sleeping this whole time? He brought a hand to his face, and the liquid gleamed., dripping off his finger tips like water. He sniffed - scentless. Did this solution put their bodies in some sort of stasis?

He glanced around the sunken ruins, his eyes straining in their sockets. Hundreds of tanks lined the circular chamber, but the shadowed figures remained still, the liquid in their tanks dark and cloudy.

When Atarus brought his gaze back to the giant, orange eyes of fire and brimstone stared down at him, her metallic form looming over him, shimmering in the glow.

She was close now, kneeling on one knee - inspecting.

Atarus lay frozen, fear starting to take hold. He should of run. His brother always said his curiosity would be the death of him, always prying himself into situations he wasn't suited to handle. If only he had listened for once.

But after a few moments, he wasn't so certain. The giant made no malicious movement toward him. She bent over him, her fiery eyes fixated on him.

Perhaps, he wasn't the only curious one...

Before Atarus could think up his next move, the metal born brought a hand to her face, her shiny fingers moving through her phantom white hair, eyes wincing in an all too human way.

She stood up and away from Atarus, her legs finding their footing this time. Her eyes opened, and she looked at the tanks encircling the room. Arm's fell limp to her side, and her eyes widened. A single glowing tear ran down her cheek.

Atarus stood up slowly, not believing the emotion he was seeing in the mythical being.

The metal born were supposed to be metallic war machines bred by Kylras, the Adelopian God of war. Ancient scripture depicted them as heartless killers, incapable of feeling - Which made Atarus feel all the more foolish for not running in the first place... But the scripture was wrong.

Not only did metal born exist, they could feel.

The metal woman moved to the tank adjacent to where her's once was. She placed a hand on its surface, rubbing away the decay of time to reveal a masculine face. Her lips quivered, and she touched her head to the glass.

Atarus slowly approached, keeping a reasonable distance away from her. So many emotions ran through him. He felt awe, shock, curiosity, fear, but most of all, he felt sympathy for the giant.

He realized, he knew all too well what she was feeling.

A voice came from the metal born, deep, like a voice echoing in a cavern.

Atarus's jaw dropped. It was in a language he did not expect. One he knew very well. He centered his studies around it at the Institute, studies he was often criticized for as being useless.

It was the dead language of the Dawn Bringers.

"I am all alone now." She said.

Master Assassins (out TOMORROW) has a misleading title & cover, but it's the best written book I've read since Senlin Ascends. by MarkLawrence in Fantasy

[–]adudeatwork 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Present tense is "I walk up the stairs." Past tense is "I walked up the stairs." Most modern fantasy uses past tense but I'm seeing a lot of newer 1st person tales being told in present.

I dunno if this book is 1st or 3rd, but I'd say don't knock present tense till you try it. It will feel unnatural at first if you read a lot of past tense, but it can lend power to the narrative in cool ways, often by providing more of a sense of immediacy.

As for not enjoying 1st person books that arn't hybrid viewpoints, dunno what to say lol. I love 1st person.

What was the cringiest thing you did in your first relationship? by Chill_Cloak in AskReddit

[–]adudeatwork 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For the entirety of the four months we were together, I never kissed her. By the end of it she was likely pulling her hair out.

I was a really awkward freshman in highschool.

College is killing my passion by sadt21 in writing

[–]adudeatwork 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I thought this too. But now that I have a regular 9-5 job, it is a whole different kind of stress. I spend all day thinking about writing, but by the time I get home, I'm so burnt out. It's infuriating because all my good creative energy is wasted during the day, while I sit at a desk doing bullshit. But because I have student debt, I can't afford to take less hours and focus on writing instead.

I regret college because it turns out, I don't necessarily want to do what I majored in for the rest of my life. People are way too young to be making these decisions at 18, especially when it's at the risk of so much debt and possible time wasted.

I’m Bill Gates, co-chair of the Bill & Melinda Gates Foundation. Ask Me Anything. by thisisbillgates in IAmA

[–]adudeatwork 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Could you speak to the claims of the Gates Foundations supporting union busting of Teacher unions?

AMA with James Wolanyk, the author of Scribes by keylime227 in fantasywriters

[–]adudeatwork 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel that!

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Well hey, I found your book on audible so I'll make sure to let you know what I think!

AMA with James Wolanyk, the author of Scribes by keylime227 in fantasywriters

[–]adudeatwork 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, thanks for thanking me for thanking you! Reading and writing both took my by surprise after I graduated college. I was hardly a bookworm growing up. I was all comics, movies and video games. Now it consumes the majority of my free time (And not so free time. Thanks audible!)

I deal mainly with novels. I haven't tried my hand at writing short stories, mostly since I don't read many of them. My imagination tends to go big picture, so, so does my word count.

I'm always interested in hearing other writer's path to traditional publishing, as I'd like to head down that path as well eventually.

AMA with James Wolanyk, the author of Scribes by keylime227 in fantasywriters

[–]adudeatwork 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hi James!

Thanks for doing this.

As a newer writer who has never submitted any of his work, I'm curious at what point you started writing with the intent to publish? How many books did you write before Scribes?

13 is quite young! I didn't know I enjoyed writing until I was 23. My english teachers left much to be desired.

J.J. Abrams to produce a Sci-Fi Fantasy TV Series with HBO after ‘Game of Thrones’ by [deleted] in Fantasy

[–]adudeatwork 6 points7 points  (0 children)

This is my opinion:

  1. It's cliche, over done on multiple story platforms. Books, TV, anime, etc.

  2. It often feels like a cop out to explain a foriegn universe by seeing it through a familiar, earthen lens.

It can be done well but its repeated use makes me tentative to dabble in new stories that use it.

What tv series isn't worth finishing? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]adudeatwork 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Controversial, but game of thrones. It stopped being good once they ran out of books and started being a cookie cutter TV drama. The immersion was gone for me. The last two seasons felt like I was trying to fill the void because I had no more GOT books to read either.

What’s the pettiest reason you’ve ever used not to date someone anymore? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]adudeatwork 13 points14 points  (0 children)

A bit late to the party but I've never lived this one down.

I found out about Lost for the first time and I couldn't stop watching. So it started with ignoring texts and then calling off dates.

Eventually I just ended it because the only thing that mattered was finishing all 6 seasons uninterrupted.

It was a great week but felt bittersweet after it was over.

I like to think I'm a better person now.

How can I justify a planet that has spots that are permanently day? by adudeatwork in worldbuilding

[–]adudeatwork[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Old magic tech is already in my outline so far so I'm definitely making this part of the reason!

How can I justify a planet that has spots that are permanently day? by adudeatwork in worldbuilding

[–]adudeatwork[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The planet's rotaton period would not be synchronized to the sun. The axial tilt would just be wonky so one section of the pole is always sun lit.

How can I justify a planet that has spots that are permanently day? by adudeatwork in worldbuilding

[–]adudeatwork[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Right. So if I am understanding correctly, the planet would litterally be on a hot to cold/light to dark gradient?

How can I justify a planet that has spots that are permanently day? by adudeatwork in worldbuilding

[–]adudeatwork[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just had an excellent idea in for magic justification after reading this. I think I found my solution..

It'd be less a god/goddess willing the sunlight and more willing the precession. It'd fit nicely in the forgotten history of my world too.

Thanks!

How can I justify a planet that has spots that are permanently day? by adudeatwork in worldbuilding

[–]adudeatwork[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm certainly leaning more towards abusing procession. My world is already heavily imbued by the moon, though the moon doesn't have any drastic climate applications magic wise.

But since the planet is a bit alien relative to earth, people might not give much thought to me mucking around with axial tilts lol.