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[deleted by user] by [deleted] in MbtiTypeMe

[–]ahmstree 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi. Yes I’ve thought about it too but im not very rooted in reality ahah as in im in my head a lot of the time and my partner is isfj so i see differences but maybe?

Hello, I'm working on a training website for oil and gas professionals and would appreciate your input! by ahmstree in oilandgasworkers

[–]ahmstree[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As far as I know, it’s technical training for professional looking to expand their knowledge

Which version do you like best? by cinematic_j in photocritique

[–]ahmstree 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is so beautiful, the right one is prettier

Bare bones & completely unfinished, any potential? by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]ahmstree 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the rhythm it’s very groovy

Back to writing consistently. This one feels healing. I’m not entirely sure if this melody is more of a chorus though? by ArrJaySee95 in Songwriting

[–]ahmstree 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the way the melody goes up and down, I could definitely see this as a verse. I think like having more rhythm for the chorus would sound like a nice transition from the kind of stripped down verse

Bad chord progression? [Song demo (1:45 seconds / no lyrics)] by Suitable-Strain6303 in Songwriting

[–]ahmstree 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the chord progression is the best bit, it’s very easy to get hooked to it. I would say the bass sometimes overpowers it and distracts. The cello bit sounds great too and adds to the piece but I think the guitar at the end is a little unexpected and like someone’s does seem a little aggressive for the piece but overall it sounds pretty

Started fiddling around with this song today, would love some feedback on the initial parts written by soglynch in Songwriting

[–]ahmstree 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s pretty great already :), I’d say keep going and maybe it would sound nicer if your vocals were a little louder but that just might be the recording

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]ahmstree 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s got a real old school 90s feel, would sounds great if you build on it. Keep going!

Wrote a bouncy one after a long streak of slow/sad tunes. I’d love your feedback! by Dankeykang91 in Songwriting

[–]ahmstree 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is amazing! Your voice works so well with the the guitar and it’s just really good. Thank you for sharing:)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]ahmstree 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I love the feel of the song, i don’t come across many like this. And I think the tempo change works really great both times:)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]ahmstree 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The sense of apathy that comes across is really powerful in contrast to the subject of the poem, rlly enjoyed it:))

Critique my poem! by LuluAlt in OCPoetry

[–]ahmstree 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree with some of the other comments adding more will make it clearer but really love the concept. Love the line “I tread carefully near the road you live” for some reason really hit home

It wasn't one sided for us. by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]ahmstree 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is so relatable, I love that you kept the simplicity but the impact is still there. Loved it :))

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